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See this is how you avoid a bunch of BS with the heroes. Tony realized reallll quick not to mess around.

Holyyyy author cooked here. Got my heart going.

So far so good. Biggest issue I have so far is that MC tends to be a childish idiot at times. Otherwise, the writing quality itself is quite good.

Thanks for the chapter! I really hope the romance isn't heading in the sh*tty cultivator style. Seduces and 'falls in love' with a girl, sleeps with her, "I must leave and grow stronger but will return", never returns but repeats this over and over again.

This is pretty good. It's refreshing to see a Naruto do "what needs to be done" without losing himself or immediately going the sacrifice route.

Thanks for the chapter! Gonna be honest, not sure how long this can hold my attention with him essentially being an ambitious humanoid computer, The writing quality is fantastic though.

This

MC get's sh*t done. Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter! The only thing he needs to be scared of is Aizen not trying hard enough honestly.

There was something of a good premise early on but you shot it all to hell with a lack of understanding the Essences. The MC himself started out decent but is becoming less and less likable over the past few chapters. I guess what it really comes down to is that you can't do a multi Essence story and then nerf the sh*t out of them. Just call it a special ability at that point. It's like a Saiyan without zenkai or the ability to go Super Saiyan.