This would be a really good story if it didn’t read like a Chinese novel were everybody seems dumb to make the mc look good

Finally back to the important stuff

Yeap didn’t seem that important

It’s a average story not worth paying for. Would be a better story if the author whole premise for the mc using his in dumb ways is because I made his power to strong can’t have him become to op.

So it all comes down to I made his power to strong gotta have mc use it in a dumb way to even it out at that point should have gave him a really limited power that could get super strong and been done

Exactly at this point he’s just there for comedic effect

Bruh could have went without these three chps

Wanna keep reading it but at this point 7 months to get 21 chps it’s just not worth it

This has to be the worst pjo story ever written. The writing and story development are bad with nothing good about them like others have said how did u spend like 5 or 6 chps just writing about how they were making their forms you could have put all that in one chp. The world building is bad but not the worst but considering your basing it off a great story don’t know how you made it bad.

I’ll give them a try after I finish the ones I’m reading now

👍🏾hope your story eventually becomes good

😂why would I need permission to leave I been removed it after I caught up and seen that it wasn’t good enough to pay for chps I just wrote my review and comment just because I felt like it at the time

It doesn’t even matter this is just one of the daily free novels that I will read now cuz it’s free and not care bout anymore after it’s not and move on

If you had good reading comprehension I said he would become a lil humble or something would change didn’t say he had to become humble but u would know that if your comprehension was better

Anything it just feels like he gets cocky gets shown he’s not all that then goes right back to being cocky over and over again you think after the second time being shown that he’s nowhere near the top he would be a lil humble or sum

It’s your average system story with a terrible mc. The world background is detailed and the update speed is good, but it’s all ruined by how boring the mc is. It’s been 206 chps and the mc is just as slow as he was when he starred he has nothing that makes you want to read about him.

It’s crazy to me that’s it’s been 194 chps and the mc hasn’t had any character growth didn’t even have to be a lot of it but at least something.

How are we 148chps in and it feels like nothing important has happened but stuff about the system and the one girl

Forreal like bruh all the stuff you have seen and be screaming at everything

Yeap they have me trapped can’t get away from them