holy moly... awesome 👍

omg 😱 ohhh my godddddd, moreee.

best worm fanfiction i ever read, spectacular quality.

Awesome, give me more:))))

man I came across this fanfiction years ago an I loved it very much, and now remake ... awesome 👍, good job.

#Gulp# this.. e. fu## it , I'm speechless, if you were near me Mr author-san i would kiss you and I'm not even gay, I'm an fanfiction addict like my own version of cocaine and you buddy became long ago my nr 1 provider, jokes aside RESPECT i bow before your greatness, i genuity wish you wish you the best because you deserve it, I hope your beautiful mind and kaleidoscopic ocean of creativity never goes dry. RESPECT

P.s your very capable huge potential it's clear that you got the gift of creativity, just focus on the right path.

I'm confused.., usually when that happens it's no good, the mc became op in one chapter, he created his first lover, he plays araund like a irresponsible fool , basically a creep, oh i get it.... power it's intoxicating for sure but once going on that path forgetting what's in stake, like his own humanity because no matter how strong he became his base it's human. Ok ok what's I'm trying to say your lusing control over your own creation , from neutral he goes chaotic neutral from there he goes chaotic and finally a vilan\creep, this story gots lots of potential if you don't slip in that direction, plus the ecces of useless word count describing non essential stuff kinda ruining the show.

You're spoiling us with your... what's the right word I can't seem to find it, perfect work.. flawless.. marvelous.. maybe your superb addictive joyride, perfect like always. *Cheers*

perfect

perfect so far.

flawless, keep it up, it's surely promising a lot.

Buddy,bro, author~san : listen to me and only me.... You're doing fine,hell better than fine, your work it's flawless, you don't need to listen to anyone saying this and that. You're creating a masterpiece by yourself, keep everyone bla bla bla at a decent distance because you're doing just fine. cheers!

I.... ! ?? I can't find the proper words to describe all this, it's like you're a freaking *kinder surprise egg* best chocolate plus a super duper magnificent surprise inside , you're the best author i ever had the honor of reading his work, truly magnificent. thank for your hard work, keep doing your stuff as usual, you always nail it, and a hope your creative mojo never runs dry ever, you deserve it. CHEERS 🥂

thanks for your hard but fun work, i think I speak in everyone's name when i say We want more, hehe.

muhahahahaha..... omg seriouslyyyy bro haha....wow this chapter was hilarious 😂, good job and thanks.

I have no words to describe how pleased I'm with this masterpiece , you earned my attention and my power stones . Cheers you have done a impressive good job , flawless , take care .

If you have a clear image/idea of what you wanna achieve do your best at your own pace , you know fanfiction means self forfiling fantasy experience or your own imagination joyride , try your best while having fun .

Talking from experience bud,I burned out after 159k word count . P.S. .... i really meant every word i said , best quality work that i can hardly wait to drink it like a thirsty man on a desert ride and also it's genuine your doing 100%, just perfect .

God it really feel mentally dry after 12 chapters , I feel that this fanfiction got super potential but the way it's made it seams tailored for cinese people only even after being translated into English , i mean some old saing are cool and profound in Chinese but once translated into English they seem silly children nonsense . I'll be honest the idea it's perfect the main character it's awesome story line more than perfect but if you don't fix the " only for Chinese makes sense" part it turns into a chore , my advice remake it better without the nonsense blabbering and I'll read this with pleasure , cheers .