quite irritating with the control

i feel you, I've reads alot of fanfiction like that and I only stay for the plot.

bring in an alt universe with the illuminati or a alt timeline with his kids feeling from the time people forgot their name.

yes my waifu Scathach

his two bloodlines don't seem to be doing anything honestly

honestly tired on Hermione

mxm Hate the Hermione x Severus

you know this Fic is one of my favorites in the past few years. but at the same time these mass releases stress me out because a few times other authors have done the same thing and then after a mass release an update/announcement would be made that they are dropping it for one reason of another. so I'll just enjoy this while I can.

other than that can't wait for more

you should have made the ranking speaking in bold and make it feel more robotic or detached

he could have just done that at the beginning

that's nust pushing him to be the age when the plot starts and with him having no training,.....

read it via Google or any other site you use and then use the translation feature to change it to your language. some times you get that one Chinese novel that is a cut above the rest.

the author is like making this story worse by not making him powerful and using the qurik better. trying to not make him OP is just making him seem dumber and regressing into a child rather than the teenager or young adult he was.

should turn the savage lands into something similar to Avalon and that play that America from the Dr strange movie came from. a place outside space and time. both dependent and independent of the multiverse. he could get the idea from reading the books from the ancient one and could have come across avalon being mentioned

hope you are doing well, and welcome back 🙏

thanks 😊

what site is this on, or the Chinese name ? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . m. . .. . . . m . .. ... . . m. . . .

i really don't like the way this relationship is , so much drama

the two being bi just makes stuff more complicated... anybody read ahead wanna tell me what happens