VoidBuddha

Oh

That's it? Slaughtering a universe is like a drop in the ocean in one. Forget quintillions, that's only a sand particle in the infinite beach of souls taken by one.

I can't believe you got offended for nothing, then shit on me and theb you're lecturing me about being nice to others.. This entire farce says twice as much about you then it does about me

Bro where did you see me dogging on it? God!? It was a genuine question... Go back and read what I wrote bro... Getting offended for everything...

'Complain'? Might wanna read what I wrote again.. Nvm this is probably you so forget I asked.

How old are you and from which country... Do you have a job? I wanna know what kind of people write these kind of novels...

Harem is instant garbage. Low quality. For lust filled incel man children. It's a fantasy for degenerate loser young adults. Sorry not sorry

Yeah that's okay but it felt a little incomplete. It's fine tho.

No cries of agony by the girl in utter confusion? I thought we'd see that.

Same. The repetitions have stopped too. I think the only think left for the author to do is fix some of the repetitions in the earlier chapters. And it'd be nice to give more depth to the characters of his father and mother as they seem a bit plain and lacking depth. Their motivation isn't clearly explained. Rarely do people want power for power. Power is a means to an end for most. Anyway some character depth could push this novel even further. Kudos.