this book is quite terrific and stands to be great. the ML is quite a refreshing character to see with a personality trait not often found on the streets of webnovel.well-done author
oh! I guess you will have to find out the secret in that..x
"Oh it has to be, she's the chosen one." Neoma replied as a small smile graced her face. "It has to be. I have to speak to mother, I'll be back soon." She turned and walked towards the passage way leading to the garden, to the mysteries of her world.
I love love the point of view you have chosen to write this story from, it feels like a first person point of view and it's just so cool and the tenses are constant and I just admire the uniformity. I'm keeping up with it dear author. good job!
I actually love the story line and have added it to my collection. His uncle didn't kill his parents, who did. I would actually like to know. Dear Author, while your writing style can very much improve, I like the story and it's got potential