EternalEden
I like fantasy novels. Maybe someday I'll write one and contribute to this site. We'll see.
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Came for a witty character and an interesting spin on the series. Left with a depressed little emo and the same shenanigans as the first-year story. Despite all the changes the author likes to pretend happened, the end result is the same. And sure, maybe things won't change immediately, but expecting their readers to endure 60+ chapters before they actually get there makes them a clown.
No. Because now I already have a billion dollars.
Bro was terrified at the idea of causing so many human and Pokemon deaths. Now he's TRYING to cause them...
*so
You're doing well. At this point, the story might become closer to a slice-of-life story, but that's fine. I'd be entertained seeing Earth's advancement and possible integration with the galactic civilizations and/or powers. Maybe some small hiccups along the way like Kang the Conqueror. Marvel IS allergic to peace after all, lol.
Considering the alien attack, and the portal invasion, Earth isn't thrilled to trade with outsiders yet...
The story is rather unique, and it does seem like the author tries to put their own spin on things. However, this is heavily undermined by a big flaw of the story. The author has about as much subtlety as a wrecking ball. They're not very good at creating sudden events in a realistic manner. Problems will pop up left and right, with little to no warning, or sometimes even reason. Giving the flimsy excuse the MC must somehow be unlucky. When this author wants something to happen, it will happen, quality be damned. Many times they can't even be bothered to put in the effort for it not to come off as jarring. This is a very frequent problem in the story, and it makes it rather difficult to enjoy despite its positives.
Another good story with good potential suddenly turned trash by laziness and cliches. The story was good at first and had a decent amount of originality. However, as the chapters went on, the translation started becoming lazier and more like a Chinese translation. And becomes worse when it tries to force in Chinese cultivation into the world of pokemon, and does so rather badly. It's even more depressing when you read the notes from the author talking about how hard he worked on this and issues irl.
They all immediately died because no one thought: "What if he turned it off?"
No...that's just called common sense. Like he said, if tides were really that easy to cause they'd happen nonstop.
The quality is good, but it has a lot of info dumps that it constantly drops on the reader. Not to mention the author already has a story about the Hyuga clan, so there are a lot of parts that are basically the same and repeat themselves. The author also has no concept of power levels. Throwing around "Kage Level" left and right to many different characters. They even call Sasuke Jonin level right after he just got the curse mark. Originally I gave it 3 stars, but after 20 or so chapters, the story's quality gets worse and worse. I lasted until about 30 chapters since the premise of the story was interesting but it really just becomes intolerable.
Kage this, Kage that...
Shikamaru just gave up in the finals. Ain't no way he got promoted when he barely showed anything good. Author is just lazy.
You soloed 2 elite jonin even before the exam, which would get their attention. And your byakugan range is only 2 kilometers. You'd be spied on without even knowing about it.
It's not a bad idea. Even a pig can dig up a truffle sometimes it seems.