TrapOfRed
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2018-12-26 入りましたGlobal
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TrapOfRed11mthに返信 Steelrod_ImmortalCh 1 Prologue- TrapOfRed2yrコメントCh 25 Congratulations, you are targeted!
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I'd say go for whatever. Your writing style is pretty fluid and the story premise is none like I seen before, if you prefer to rewrite it and you're happy with the rewrite, stick with it but if you wish to continue the old one, I'd also be down for it. The new chapter does seem to be a lot more fleshed out, the pacing in the old one while good, did feel a little quick. in conclusion, I'll leave it up to you, good book my g
Ch 19 Feedback Request - TrapOfRed3yrコメントCh 1897 Escalation
- TrapOfRed3yrコメントCh 1896 Atmosphere
- TrapOfRed3yrコメントCh 1893 Attrition
- TrapOfRed3yrコメントCh 1893 Attrition
- TrapOfRed3yrコメントCh 1893 Attrition
- TrapOfRed3yrコメントCh 1889 Emergence
- TrapOfRed3yrコメントCh 1888 Growing Tensions
- TrapOfRed3yrコメントCh 1786 Shameless
- TrapOfRed3yrに返信 Isekawaii
One in the dungeon, another in the Hestia Manor and the last one being in the Elven Forest
Once the 10m tall tree had sprouted, Vahn was greeted by the ever-adorable Yggy as she popped out of the trunk with a slightly mischevious expression on her face. Vahn already knew what she was going to do so he kneeled down and allowed Yggy' to plant a kiss on his cheek, granting him the fourth boost to his [Yggdrasil's Champion]. Each boost had given him about a 2% increase to his Source Energy regeneration rate and, even though it seemed like a small amount, this made it possible for him to replenish his reserves in under twenty minutes. If she granted him all nine, it wouldn't be impossible for him to replenish his entire reserves in under sixteen minutes which, if combined with the Sub Space orb, meant he could be topped off in just 2.5 minutes. In actually, the [Yggdrasil's Champion] buff was slowly turning Vahn into even more of a ridiculous existence than before...