Etiger789
System/fiction/harem
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Etiger7893hコメントyou're adding way too many flowery words that just aren't necessary to have.
Her search led her to the depths of the castle, to a chamber long forgotten and not used for a long time by all.- Etiger7893hコメントWithin the Red Keep, in the King's private chambers, the scent of herbs and the sharp tang of iron filled the air. Viserys lay upon his bed, a shadow of the robust king he once was. The Grand Maester's hands moved with a grim determination, excising the rotten flesh from his festered wounds. Each slice, each removal of rotted skin, was a silent testament to the fragility of life, even for a king.
- Etiger7895dコメント
What's with the broken up paragraphs.
excitement and apprehension. - Etiger7895dコメント'You got 'em, tiger,' he thought, feeling a surge of confidence.
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Really...a bour injured him, even if his Asgardian blood is only at 15, they have remarkable durability, and are way stronger than normal humans. That should have been an easy fight.
Yet, Aerion felt a surge of excitement. He consciously placed his sword within the space ring and sprinted towards the boar, leaping high into the air. His hands came together like a hammer as he descended, smashing down onto the boar. - Etiger7895dコメントCh 24 Watching the Stars
- Etiger7895dに返信 JussMonty
I've not finished Dune yet so I don't know about that.
" I see now my golden path, one where I am the emperor of all that is known to man." A chuckle escaped his lips." Come, Karni, we have things to do." - Etiger7896dに返信 Dogaunt"ARGH! Just leave me alone" He growled, trying to hide his pain and discomfort.
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What happened to forging his own destiny, then poof one old lady appears and he snaps all of that.
" I see now my golden path, one where I am the emperor of all that is known to man." A chuckle escaped his lips." Come, Karni, we have things to do." - Etiger7896dコメント
Was that also not intentional Author.
The moment the words came out of his mouth, Ken instantly regretted it. He could see the light from Daichi's eyes pale a little and his fists clench as he stood in silence for a while. - Etiger7896dコメント
But i thought he was stronger then daichi, now he's weaker then him???
While he had improved his batting, it was nowhere near the level of Daichi's. He lacked the Coordination and power to slog balls like his friend, at least for now. He suddenly regretted not taking that Balance and Coordination Elixir last night instead of the Agility. - Etiger7896dコメント
So he can't hit something a 9 to 12-year-old could throw...AND HIT.
この段落は削除されました。 - Etiger7896dに返信 leeroycgna
But using the same muscle groups, he's still doing similar movements like abduction, not to mention the shock of hitting a ball and the force used swinging a bat.
The only problem was his batting skills. As the Ace pitcher on the team, his poor batting skills were overlooked due to how much value he had brought the team while defending. - Etiger7896dコメントKen did not hesitate as he began to spam the no button to decline the mission. This had touched his bottom line, there was no way that he could take himself off the mound, especially now since he had another chance.
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Wow, what a dic#, lashing out at a kid when you're an adult. hope this isn't his attitude to everyone when he's upset.
"ARGH! Just leave me alone" He growled, trying to hide his pain and discomfort. - Etiger7897dコメント
Haha
This unexpected question made Yueyue pause, and after a moment she murmured, "It's delicious."