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Liked the beginning, though the fact that the MC apears to take luffys crew spoiled for me, good luck with the story

Not a fan of the owl to be honest, by his personality the wolves should be it, any more reeks of magic

And personally i never liked storys where Muggleborns go around calling everything archaic, i mean, should wizards go around calling muggles cavemen since they cant teleport around and such? Specially when you consider technology doesn’t work around magic

Nice story, the pace is somewhat fast but if the focus are the later years or after Hogwarts it makes sense, the speed in wich he learns “advanced” magic is weird by this pace he will learn everything there is to learn by the second/third year wich doesn’t sound possible, but the apparent focus guns will have in this story are kind of a dealbreaker, I understand if he has to use them on the muggle world but on the magic one i just can’t stand it it shouldn’t be a hp fanfic than but something else

Liked the premisse but Vampires having magic doesn’t makes sense, immortal beings with acess to magic would never be hunted by wizards, most likely the opposite would happen, all wizards wanting to live forever would simply become vampires since they dont lose their magic

“Sirius’ savior” by silverfawkes I believe

Several crossovers end up spoiling the story for me, shame, seemed interesting

And it was going to Harem, not sure if this writer will change that or not if he continues writing beyond where it stopped

Not really completed but it goes to chp 30 which should be equivalent to 200 chapters in this story more or less (the chapters are longer)

For those interested in reading ahead the original goes by the name “Harry Potter and the gift of memories” by “The Engulfing Silence” 2012-2013 apparently completed

Stolen fic, original being Delenda Est by Lord Silvere (completed)

I will soon delete the review not to influence the story score

Nice chapter, just dont know why you didn’t make leman either the firstborn or second

A dual wielding Lord Stark should have been enough warning for me but I still tried to read it (They have a greatsword Ice it doesn’t make sense not to use it), but in the second chapter we discover it is an AU story, more than the premise tells us (If i had to guess it was done so the Writer can romance MC to the incest family). Writer put correct labels on it

A great sword, not possible to dual wield it with another

Liked the story until MC ate the devil fruit, why most fanfics insist on the mc eating a devil fruit and a weird one at that i will never understand

Hey writer, in this rewrite the MC will have devil fruit powers? if so the same as the original? Tks

Read up to Ch 18, for now it’s a good story and interesting plot. Just a question for the writer, will this story have harem? Not really a fan and would apreciate the heads up if possible. Good luck with the story

Interesting idea though not well developed, by ch 4 a month or so has passed and we dont see 1 proper conversation or scene, it feels like i am reading a story on fast forward where every scene is told and not shown, by this point we also don’t know anything about the mc aside from his name, does he have family? Friends? What did he do? It feels weird reading it. Author, good luck moving foward with the story