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Frankly I don't love the idea of MC's relationship only with Endorsi. She's nice, but I feel that Hwa Ryun, Yuri and Maschenny are much better(Well, in terms of design and charisma) But I understand that creating a romantic relationship with them is not very realistic. Although I think with Yuri it's definitely possible, not because Baam didn't dare means MC can't. And as for Hwa Ryun, him being an irregular should open a couple of doors with her.

Maybe this is just me, but I feel like the fight scenes are terribly bad. The mc's fighting style is terribly simple and uncreative. Of all the versions of gravity magic I've read, yours is without a doubt the worst. I'd like to believe it's because you're still many years away from mastering such complicated magic. But I'm pretty sure I read that MC had already mastered it.

The demonic eye of Gishlaine

Why is it that every time I read a stupid comment, it's yours?

This story is too good for web novel, you should start publishing elsewhere. I hate to say this, but maybe you should open a patreon. Just so you don't lose the motivation to write. It would be heartbreaking if you abandon this masterpiece. All in all, the best Mushoku tensei fanfic.

As a reader, I greatly appreciate the work you do to research the MT canon and then explain it to us. All your comments are really worth reading. But about Orsted, really his mana capacity is so “low”? Isn't it about Orsted's mana level when he first appears? Orsted was not at his full capacity at that time. I always imagined that his mana would be higher than Rudeus', at least.

I'm sure I've read that Rudeus has more mana than Laplace, but I don't recall reading that he has twice as much as Laplace.

It's boring for you, but if the author likes it, let him write his story. Besides, I liked it, the spell and its limitations, it is very well explained. On the other hand, it also leaves a precedent in his ability to create spells.

Frankly I see only one way Rudeus can avoid the mana disaster. Maybe using magic cancellation on the orb can disperse it. But that's just a wild guess. Still, he can always get his loved ones to safety. With his magical power and good reputation, his relatives won't doubt him if he tells them that thing is going to explode and wipe out the region. That would not be enough to evacuate the entire population. But it can definitely get his family to safety. At this point it wouldn't make sense for him to stand idly by. The only problem is that without Sylphi, Ariel will die.