Zerobeast

I can recognise Chatgpt when I see it. Bullshit getting repeated

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The novel starts off with overly complicated vocabulary in the first 100+ chapters, where each paragraph seems to repeat the same ideas but phrased differently. It feels like the author is just trying to reach a word count rather than advancing the plot or developing the characters meaningfully. The main character (MC) is disappointing. Despite being a transmigrator, he behaves foolishly and lacks the qualities expected of someone with such an advantage. The novel includes an antihero tag, but it would be more fitting to describe the MC as "brain dead" due to his poor decision-making and lack of initiative. There are notable similarities to the novel *Shadow Slave*. In both stories, the MCs are portrayed as weak and easily manipulated by the main female leads. The world settings and supporting characters are also strikingly similar, making the story feel unoriginal. The MC is indecisive and lacks conviction, coming across as socially awkward and unsure of himself. He fails to recognize when to assert himself and when to be strategic. The author has done a poor job of portraying his character, leading the novel to feel more like a drama rather than an engaging story. Overall, the novel falls short in character development and originality, and its execution leaves much to be desired.

While I acknowledge the overall epic nature of the storyline, the centrality of the main character is paramount for me. If I find the protagonist poorly written or lacking depth, it becomes challenging to stay engaged with the novel. I prefer to invest my time in books where the main character is compelling and well-developed, as they significantly influence the overall direction and enjoyment of the narrative. Not the first 'good' novel I have dropped, and I'm sure it won't be the last. Wish most characters would be well written like Fang Yuan from RI, Klein moretti from Lotm, and Jonathan from superhunt. But then I suppose some authors are just that much better and have a much greater grasp in what makes for awesome protagonists.

The protagonist, from the outset, consistently exhibits a lack of discernment. Since the first chapter, he foolishly considers sharing his secrets with anyone he deems a friend. His inability to foresee consequences and absence of shrewdness characterize him as short-sighted. The character's actions and choices appear imprudent and hinder the development of a more astute and strategic main character. Bloodyhell! Had to drop this novel because the author decided to go the naruto route with the MC. I just feel like strangling the MC. Doesn't care if his secrets are exposed. Disappointment.

I started this novel with great anticipation due to its intriguing concept. However, my enthusiasm waned over the 400+ chapters as the main character's development disappointed me. The protagonist, though well-intentioned, lacks the strategic mindset needed. His excessive emotional attachment and openness about his unique powers hinder his depth. The narrative fails to explore the importance of secrecy and the wisdom of withholding certain information. The protagonist's trust is unwarranted, and his transparent nature detracts from a more nuanced characterization. Essentially, the main character embodies the cliché of a well-meaning yet imprudent hero, reminiscent of the "power of friendship" trope seen in characters like Naruto. I don't want to see an edgelord or anything but I'm highly dissapointed that I really have to drop such a gem due to constantly feeling the urge to strangle the MC for his naivety and lack of foresight or shrewdness. Since when did cold and calculating characters go out of style?