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Vicic84842 years agoコメントYou're place => Your place?
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You don't even need to unload your pallets now, just download them. :)
- Vicic84843 years agoコメント
Should probably be "right next door" instead of "store" ;)
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Congrats and welcome back. I through that you dropped it.
- Vicic84844 years agoコメント
Oh, I didn't see that you started writing chapters again. Welcome back.
- Vicic84844 years agoコメント
Of course we missed you, how could you leave us so long without a single chapter? :)
- Vicic84844 years agoコメント
Thx for the chapter, I really like the real life snippet.
- Vicic84844 years agoコメント
I think it would be interesting to know more of his backstory as we really don't know much but do what you think is best, you are the one planing and writing the story after all.
- Vicic84844 years agoに返信 Vicic8484
That he is a rzir*
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I would replace "the rzir" by him, "the man" or something like that she isn't supposed to know that he is a fair (I think)
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