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nurilucas

nurilucas

Lv4
2018-10-26 入りましたPhilippines
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  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    発表

    I just love this story. This is not similar to the story I shocked the nation after divorce despite the similar plot and title. Deym, this is a new world. I love the FL. She's strong yet filial. I also love her father. Despite being disabled, he really loves his daughter. About the ML? Well, let's just say he's a bonus because you will be more than satisfied with the FL. Please, can someone provide me the raw of this? TIA.

  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    発表

    I love this story. I already read the raw until Chapter 287 but the serials are still ongoing. I am re-reading the translations. Love the FL and ML's own story as well as the stories of the people surrounding them. There's no shortage of beautiful women and handsome men in the story. I also love how the FL is not as invincible as other FLs. Like she has other people to do her biddings. But I have issues on the translation. I hope they're just typos coz it kinda ruin the story.

  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    に返信 lilblueangelxd

    I think this is not a translated work.

  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    発表

    This is a breath of fresh air among the novels that tackles divorce and then the stupid ML will realize how much he loves the FL or whatever. I'm looking forward to this story. I mean, let's normalize stories about how strong independent women attracts younger men (although it wasn't said if the ML is really younger than the FL). Anyone who knows the raw? Can't wait to read this. Hope this will be picked.

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  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    発表

    I'm not sure about this but the story is similar to squid game based on synopsis. Who plagiarized who? Too early to tell but if it's the same, then I'm not reading this one.

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  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    に返信 Youngjs

    I've read some reviews saying that the FL has a twin? How true is this? And that Ye Ci took over the FL's twin identity?

  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    に返信 Joannekey

    Do you have the title? is still the same? I don't want to read this if the story is like that

  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    に返信 pradhyu

    Who is the ML? Is it her crush or the brother of the child she saved?

  • nurilucas
    nurilucas3 years ago
    発表

    The plot is quite good for me. I even added this to my library. However, what's with the translation? Is this a translation made by a machine? While reading, I can't help but edit the grammar inside my head. I mean, seriously? I think it's better to read the MTL version, if there is. The names, pronouns, and even the people who are talking inside the story as all mixed up. Please give justice to the story by fixing the basics. A good sentence structure gives life to even the most boring story. Those who love to read will surely relate. (This is just a constructive criticism. No offense meant) P.S. If you delete this, I'm going to post it again.

  • nurilucas
    nurilucas4 years ago
    発表

    The plot is good although a little bit cliché, characters are strong and lovable. But I can't seem to love a book with a misspell title 'Chariman instead of Chairman. Or maybe, I wasn't informed that there's a new word like this? Can someone from webnovel edit this? I'm not a grammar police but it really downgrades the quality of the book. Thanks