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The title was a bit long but catchy! I love the philosophy at 1st chapter. The way the author write and the word choices are great too! This is a great book to read. I highly recommend it to everyone. Good job Author! 👍👏👏👏

This is a great book to read! I love the synopsis and the first chapter got me hooked and curious about what will happen to Azkiel. The Author has a great writing skill too. I love the pacing of the story and the narration of it. The Author was able to bring the readers to Azkiel's world with just the words alone. Great job Author! Looking forward for the next chapters.

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The title was intriguing and it made me curious about what this story will be. The synopsis catches my attention the same way the title captivates me. The plot was unique. But, editing is needed here and there, for example the proper punctuation and capitalization and the grammar looks fine for me the same as the pacing of the story. Also, the description at the beginning was good but, too much information was given at the very beginning which might be a problem. It's fine to give informations but, it should be lessen, since other information regarding the story can be shown in a different way other than the description/narration. Just like what the other authors/editors/coaches always say "Show don't Tell". But other than that the Author did a good job! Good luck and I'm looking forward for the rest of the chapters and on how will Mia's story unfolds as the story goes.

Wow! I'm done with the first two chapters and this story is unique and intriguing that I am getting immersed as I read further. I love how good this book is written. this is well-written, from the character designs up to the world background. everything is well-thought and well-written. the author did a great job writing this story and this is a must read/recommend!

Amazing story Author! The synopsis was intriguing, the first five chapters are well-written and established the story very well. I love how great the author write the story. The storytelling, the narration, and description are well done and well-written plus the choices of words that it made it easy to read specially for non-English speakers like me. I also love how smooth the pacing of this book. You did a great job in writing this book Author!

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Amazing! I just finished the first few chapters and I can't wait to read the next chapters! I love how short but mysterious and intriguing the synopsis are. I love how unique the plot is and the author also has a great writing style/skill that I am getting immersed in this book plus the lingering mystery feeling left in my mind after reading the first few chapters. You did a great job Author! This is a must read everyone!

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This is a masterpiece! Good job Author! The synopsis got me curious since I'm not that familiar in this genre, and reading this was a great choice. The plot was unique and I love your awesome writing skill. Author did a great job in writing this book, the narration and the choices of words are on point and fits perfectly. The author got an imaginative and creative mind and an excellent skill in putting into words the world of this book and making the readers see it with their imagination. Great job Author! Looking forward for the rest of the chapters.