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indeed, the rest of the first book is on kindle. It was the best way I found to support myself financially. Best of luck!

Very interesting! The premise is quite unique and the writing style is captivating. My only gripe would be the fickleness of the updates. Will definitely be reading more of this in the future

Interesting premise. The writing quality doesn't really flow well but it's forgivable given that the Author's first language isn't english. My advice would be: show, don't tell. Exposition must be incorporated into the story or in the character's thoughts in an organic, natural way. In the first chapter I felt like I was being slapped in the face with random info. Apart from that, good read

Pretty nice read! The writing quality is great and the story flows really well. The characters and story development feel slightly archetypal for this type of story but that's not necessarily a bad thing. I would continue reading were I not sensitive to love stories. Recommended (If you aren't as lonely as I am)!

Very interesting setting and premise, a slight reminder of the Wereworld series. However, exposition is given mainly by the narrator and not incorporated into the story, while the writing style throws me off a bit. Will be adding it to my library though, it's got great potential! One can tell the author has a lot of passion for this work, with the character design drawings and all

Very interesting premise. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but nothing too major. My only gripe with the story would be with a bit of the character design. It would be better to introduce the characters and make the reader care about them before letting anything major happen. Apart from that, great book

Remove the second "these woods" for better flow

Because if I don't support myself, I'm pretty sure nobody else will. Hope you guys enjoy my novel and give me honest feedback. Proper criticism is always welcome.

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