Judejayden

Lv4

Baba black sheep

2018-10-14 入りましたUnited States

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766.9h

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1711

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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 Davidworlork
Is writing this easy?
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 erebuss
I won't. Just clarify the context behind his power.
As if ordained by fate, Yan Jin's Nine-Neonate Hydra acquired the bloodline lineage of nine primordial archaic beasts preserved within the purple jade necklace. These beasts, whose bloodlines had been captured and sealed by the necklace, represented some of the most formidable and ancient entities in existence. When the necklace was melted into his eyes, the latent power of these primordial beasts was unleashed, initiating a transformation within Yan Jin.
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 erebuss
I don't think that is the direction, I am going for. It's not a romance based novel. More of a power trip.
After the shower, Lan Zhan meticulously groomed him. Every detail of Yan Jin's appearance was attended to with care and precision. Lan Zhan's hands moved deftly, brushing and tidying, restoring Yan Jin to his usual state of refinement. The process was both soothing and restorative, a ritual that helped to smooth away the marks of his recent ordeal and return him to his accustomed elegance.
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 LilithTepes
two things to things to keep in mind. 1- there is a pair of eye in his see of consciousness." blue eye" 2- they materialise giving him illusory colorfully eyes. I need to be more clear with my description. I apologize.
Ch 5 Nine Neonate Bloodline
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 Hawkmancody
You cannot argue with, fantasy physics, Lol...
First, he needed to consider the arrows as bullets. Since they could not gather sufficient momentum to pierce, enhancing them with blood energy could make them hit like blank bullets.
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 Harith_TM
Don't worry all critiques are welcome. As long as you are not rude everything is okay.
"It's him!" Nie Li spat, his voice filled with venom. As if responding to his anger, the lion he stood upon roared furiously, its golden mane flaring as its eyes locked onto Yan Jin with barely-contained rage.
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 Harith_TM
It has to do with his bloodline, he his a golden lion , pride is too much.
"It's him!" Nie Li spat, his voice filled with venom. As if responding to his anger, the lion he stood upon roared furiously, its golden mane flaring as its eyes locked onto Yan Jin with barely-contained rage.
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 Harith_TM
Actually nice catch
この段落は削除されました。
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 Dieudonner_17
Thanks for the recommendation.
Yet as Yan Jin began to work, the old master couldn't help but marvel at the boy's talent. Despite his lack of formal training, Yan Jin had a natural gift when it came to crafting weapons, especially arrows. His arrows were works of art—each one meticulously crafted, balanced perfectly for flight, and marked with intricate designs that displayed a keen eye for detail.
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Judejayden3 months ago
に返信 Nocht
Maybe it's not very clear. But the reaction comes from the ***** eyes in his soul. It's illusionary...or even a projection if you prefer. I suppose it's bad writing.
Suddenly, a primal roar emerged from deep within him, echoing through the universe. When he opened his eyes, a pair of blue pupils as clear as the sky, adorned with intricate ancient patterns that extended from his corneas to his temples, gave him the aura of an ancient deity.
Legend of the Divine Archer
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Legend of the Divine Archer

Blinded by betrayal, reborn with vengeance. After a fatal hiking accident, Olympic archer Yan Jin awakens in a world where bloodlines and power reign supreme. Stripped of his sight by the cruel machinations of his own clan, Yan Jin taps into a hidden bloodline, awakening abilities far beyond anything he could have imagined. Now, armed with his bow and unmatched instincts, he’s out for revenge. In this new world of ruthless politics and deadly combat, Yan Jin will carve a bloody path to uncover the truth behind his mysterious rebirth and the dark secrets of his past. Prepare for brutal battles, ingenious strategies, and a cast of eccentric allies and enemies as Yan Jin unleashes chaos in his quest for justice. Join Yan Jin as he takes aim at those who wronged him—this time, he won’t miss. PS: I’m building this world as we go, and I love hearing from readers! Your thoughts and feedback drive my creativity, so don’t hesitate to share your ideas. #SmartMC #Gore #Mature #Interactive

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125 Chs