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That's not accurate. more like first explorer problems.

I thought song was brought into the room as well?

This should be 180. 360 would be a full turn around, basically him doing the same thing.

There's a repeated paragraph

....Could we get something to signify a scene change? This is so jarring and sudden.

He already told her this before training

Veronica became Veronia for the whole chapter.

Okay, this is sloppy. The gender of the Prophet just swapped and then stayed swapped. Either male or female. One armed lady says Miss, but then it's 'his cheek twitched' in the response. Wouldn't be so bad if it was once, but it's not. Please fix. I'll remove or edit this comment once that's done.

This is a genuine question. Is it supposed to be ultimately report to him? instead of intimately

Cocked the rifle. Just trying to be helpful. Really loving this novel. Hope it continues to a proper end eventually.