Hashirama015

He should have chosen the 4 Tails instead of 5 Tails as it would be Easier to Defeat 4-Tails coz of Attribute weakness (mc's water cools down lava while Sakumoto's lightning conducts in Han's water)

he just wasted Gamer system potential. (skill level up). he only have thought about the loots drop only!? seriously, those skills obtained from loot drops are inconvenient too like needing equipment not suited for ninjas or the skill itself is strange for native people

wth.. this is naruto fanfic,ok?! why isn't he practicing Tai,Nin,gen etc Jutsu. i mean, when he face other ninjas he could not just bring out stones & start using psychokinesis, right. he won't be able to answer how

no need to add chakra, as magic & haki is already present, otherwise it will be confusing

nupamacha ?!

it feels kinda wrong to hear luffy say he is going to rule the sea... as he said to Rayleigh in cannon that it's not about domination ; it's about being more free than anyone eslse

Nice one.

Very well written... Keep it up

Hinata for me

Where is conquerors' winding? And the missile can be intercepted by devil fruit abilities coz devil fruit ability can affect seastone as long as the user isnt directly touching it. Correct me if I am wrong