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_James_Jones_

_James_Jones_

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2018-09-19 入りましたBrazil
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  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_2 years ago
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    very good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_2 years ago
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    man when i saw that this was a story about Lookism and Viral hit i was really happy since they are one of my favorite stories but this mc is really bad honestly he obviously has the strength to defend himself or react but he doesn't do anything not to mention that he It already feels like being honest and speaking your mind all the time isn't working and yet he keeps doing the same thing with a ridiculous excuse that he does it because of his father it's just pointless but I hope he changes in the next chapters since this whole situation of him being like this because of his father makes him look like a stupid child

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_2 years ago
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    great story finally someone made a slam dunk fanfiction cant wait for the next chapters[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_2 years ago
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    thanks for the spore chapter that continues to update the story

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_2 years ago
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    very bad the mc is a useless coward and the story is very boring with each chapter the story and the mc got worse and worse [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_2 years ago
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    the story had a lot of potential but i really didn't understand the mc's choices first he decides to become a criminal in the world of dc that in itself has no problem but he has no reason he just decides to be a villain and then he just decides to join to one of the most dangerous organizations in the dc world not to mention he still reveals his power for no reason

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_2 years ago
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    I really don't see any reason for him to give up on being the runestone heir since as heir he would have a safe place and an army and as for the other lords what will they be able to do he has two dragons an army and starks support what basically means the north and i doubt the king would do anything against him honestly he should be more worried about his mother and the war that is going to happen.

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_2 years ago
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    very good story hope it continues to be updated[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_3 years ago
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    the story is interesting but for me the MC is a problem he is bad in attack and defense he can't do much without mentioning that for a guy his size he is bad so we rebound too honestly the only thing the MC does well when he plays and assists in my opinion the MC doesn't have a basketball level that allows him to play in the nba he doesn't have good technique at least not at nba level and he's not very athletic at best he's above average at i know the author probably wants to develop the main character but he I exaggerate because the MC basically can't do almost anything but pass the ball with just that he he will need to learn to attack and defend not to mention that he has to gain weight since he is very weak

  • _James_Jones_
    _James_Jones_3 years ago
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    interesting I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter

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