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I thought M.C will invest in the dude?
Why just 'Fustration'? what about 'Suprise'? Author, you do know that people can feel different emotions at once right? & u made it seem like the candlelight guy wasn't expecting his attack to flop, so he shouldn't just be feeling frustrated.
Pls where can I read the RAWS? I have already caught up with the recent chapters, & I am hungry for more, it have been awhile that I have seen a trial novel that I actually like... The story is not great but it's good, so that makes it worth reading, I especially like the fact that it's not just about catching fish & streaming, I have seen alot of those & it gets boring, but I think the story would have been better if M.C does catch fish once in a while, but I guess that will defeat the purpose of the book title, anyway, I suggest you give this a chance if you like this type of books.
Isn't it better to believe, than not to? Afterall, the radio has shown its weirdness & value, the idiot should have put up a bet, no matter how small...
Be it in movies or novels, this kind of scenarios can never make sense to me, no matter how frightened a person is, the crisis at hand should have pushed her to run for her life, instead of just standing there & waiting for him to be done with kill*ng her partner, before moving on to her.
This scenario is too unreal, I know this is fiction, but still..., the police are too inefficient & unprofessional, I mean, shouldn't they have blocked the area & then sent a professional team to check the water the first corpse was fished out from incase they were some clues that could help them solve the case?
How will Joshua suffer the pain of losing a son when he personally sent said son to death? This doesn't make much sense or does it?
Crazy parents
That still shouldn't change anything
My thoughts exactly.