MishalZamir
Lv4
An aspiring young author! :) x
2018-09-16 入りましたGlobal
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MishalZamir3 years ago発表Okay, so I read the initial few chapters and I really enjoyed reading this novel and I'm surprised how the writing is quite good. I really hope for a lot of character development and twists. I wish you food luck, author!
- MishalZamir3 years agoコメント
interesting!
- MishalZamir3 years agoコメント
that's rude, sir. apologize?
- MishalZamir3 years agoコメント
I already like her
この段落は削除されました。 - MishalZamir3 years ago発表
Although, I do not read this genre but the way it has been written by the author is quite good. I really like the writing style. One thing I'd like to point out is information dumping in one paragraph. It diverts the focus otherwise everything is pretty cool about this novel. I'd definitely recommend this.
- MishalZamir3 years agoコメント
OH, Ookay, hmm
- MishalZamir3 years agoコメント
too much to take in. break it into parts 😭
- MishalZamir3 years agoに返信 MishalZamir
otherwise it's pretty good 👍🏻👍🏻
