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It was good at the beginning...but the story is really slow...I did read the raw being attracted to the story..who knows its really slow and meaning less...The MC father and ML solves most of the problems..she is just incharge of looking good.. sometimes for making it different she shows some aggressiveness...else it's the same
Both have their own lives.... Meeting a random person doesn't change anything.... Moreover for middle class people love at first sight is not happening...They don't have time to analyse the one second passer-by feeling😛
It can be seen that that you are doing a first attempt...and it's really early to rate it...But I liked ur concept...so good job.. keep it up...you can do it...
I did like it well...hope it get released soon..............................................................................................................
Short story but yaa...nice one...It was not a perfect story but a realistic story because every love will have some miscommunication first ...its not like every couple can truly share their feelings at fresh...for that they need some fights, jealously feeling etc...but once they start to share its an unbreakable bond... It was a enjoable story...grt job author...
I have completed reading the book....its quite refreshing for a contract marriage story....i loved their story from the begining to the end....
I did read those chapter..but i didnt feel so....may be i will it read again
Killian is not Caussian's son??????