rorschach

it felt gay...

what the heck with the constant verfication from Shisui or the yamanaka and why bother explaining to the client? nobody does that. it s cringe.

this fic is gold. can't wait for more. i don't want to spoil it but know that this is a very well written novel that leaves you wanting more.

why use future events to justify Mito's weightage? They don't know anything... if it's only for readers to understand, then that's breaking the fourth wall. we don't need an explanation from you, author/translator. We want the characters to play their role, infer the meaning and justify them...

i am wondering this guy doesn't have a system, how does he know the tenseigan will undergo 3 stages of evolution?

didn't he say he couldn't use its powers during the transition?

Alright. this is new. I will stay tuned. Keep up the good work.

This is a breath of fresh air among the plethora of fast food chinese or otherwise naruto fanfics.. My mind has gone stale from the repeating frameworks of those fics that i can predict the end from the first chapter. but this fanfic is very creative and i have to exercise my mind to enjoy it.. A fiction based on strategy and philosophy. Dealing with the uchiha problem from a strategic pov, using brain and reforms. rather than just using the system and dethroning fugaku, stealing mikoto and killing itachi at the start...goddamn i feel cringey just writing that. Anyway this is a gem, a must read. Don't miss it.

don't use your brain... this is a chinese novel...

you nearly became the protagonist of my new planned novel... God bless..