Xander_Paz

This is not for everyone, the author leaves some facts but the story focuses on the MC and his own growth. I think it's good to pass the time and turn off your brain for a while. I give it a 7/10

no sé qué decirte amigo creo que la historia se siente en caída pero fue bueno cuando duro

It is one of the best novels I have ever read, it is very funny and has its touches of clichés without ceasing to be entertaining. A gem, traducción Google traductor

the main character is very confusing, or the author didn't know how to give substance to the mc's personality. apart from the typical cliché of I meet the heroine and then it's time to fuck, I think one chapter of r18 is fine, but 3 or 5 chapters in a row. be a little ashamed, friend, I think if you feel like turning off your brain, this is for you.

wow that was pretty accurate, that's where the discomfort I felt when reading the novel came from, I think they took the alternate universe too seriously, the story doesn't show much development of the canon, only the occasional mention, for the advice you write about relationships you don't think you apply it, friend I know it's difficult to try to improve the character just like that, I don't know what problems you had when you wrote this or how you're doing in life in general or in love but the romance with Grayfia feels very bland it gave me some cringe but I think you invested too much in the demonic society that you loosened up on the rest.

Wow, my friend, it's so good that it's kind of hard to read. I'll give you some context: the demonic society that it presents is by far the closest thing you would imagine, you feel that it's not the society that they present to you in the novel or the anime, it's more raw with the subject of relationships but you can't help but identify with the characters and feel the doubt that it poses to you even though it shows them fleetingly, I think it's hard for me to read because it makes you think about relationships more seriously, although it always doesn't let the protagonist not go deeper into it, I think it touches my sores a lot and that's what's great... friend, great work.

la premisa es buena pero no supiste aterrizar la historia, hay cosas que se quedan sin explicación y hay muchos saltos de lógica, todo se siente muy forzado y hay partes que se repiten y sin contexto.

que grande amigo, creo que es lo mejor teniendo cuidado con todo el Lore y más si no quieres seguir un cliche. no creo que miércoles soporte al MC siendo un protagonista cliché que solo quiere pensar con la polla

en un inicio no te dan historia del protagonista, no se sabe cómo obtuvo sus poderes, como entreno, cual es su historia de fondo, nada el existe y punto. no conforme agregas otro reencarnación de otro personaje que es igual que el. el típico cliché de todas mías, amigo escribes bien pero no tienes historia. es irónico que sea una reescritura pero no mejora. suerte yo lo dejo.

hay algo que no entiendo, cual es el motivo ? si el en la película muere? cual fue el fin de toda esa manipulación si es cierto