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Been_chillin3d agoコメントGen?
- Been_chillin3d agoに返信 AvidReaderFanfics
Nah bro.. its actually not that bad.. The story idea and Power system are great too (well,for me personally 😁).. Maybe you can try using something like "make it less robotic and more natural" on your AI prompt.. i was once try writing novel myself and that actually make it slightly better.. you still need to edit it though.. Anyway... Good luck 🫡
- Been_chillin3d ago発表
3.0⭐ I was really interested in the template power system, but the heavy AI usage with almost no editing kinda killed the hype for me... The writing has a lot of repetitive sentence patterns, like: "Not... Not... Just..." or "No... No... But..." You start noticing it pretty quickly, and once you do, it's hard to ignore... It makes the dialogue and narration feel robotic instead of natural... The concept is interesting, but the execution could definitely use more editing...
- Been_chillin3d agoに返信 Nash_Divine
Translation.. probably... The dialogue feels like it's straight out of a Chinese novel.. You know? Like "this old man ...." "senior" "junior"?
- Been_chillin23d ago発表
Nice..... (☉｡☉)! ＼(°o°)／ ヽ(｡◕o◕｡)ﾉ ＼(◎o◎)／ ヾ(*’Ｏ’*)/ ✧\(>o<)ﾉ✧ (ﾉ*0*)ﾉ ヽ༼⁰o⁰；༽ノ ⋋✿ ⁰ o ⁰ ✿⋌ (｡☬０☬｡) ＼(°o°)／
- Been_chillina month agoコメント
Mikako?
- Been_chillina month agoコメント
- Been_chillina month agoに返信 Prince_of_Lan_Li
- Been_chillin2 months ago発表
OHHH..some interesting stuff has appeared!!!! 🎉🎉🎉 Though,can you change how the other member address modulo itadori? Anything instead of Senior itadori? Maybe senpai? (It's ok if you can't) (For the future chapter i meant) Sorry..it just that.."Senior" word kinda giving me some bad memories about those cheap chinese novels...
- Been_chillin2 months agoコメント
Pot ?
