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Gomuningen1mthコメントThis is the problem with authors of fanfics that make their MC powerful, they suddenly start to pull random OC enemies out their behind since they are not capable of writing powerful characters like Saitama and either rush to NERF the MC or suddenly out of the blue, some new more powerful enemy appears
Ch 125 125- Gomuningen2mthコメント
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2) They can be something like guardians of the realm. - Gomuningen2mthコメント
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1) Let him have knowledge of the DxD verse - Gomuningen2mthコメント
What is happening with the sudden drastic quality drop? This needs a proofreader!
この段落は削除されました。 - Gomuningen2mthコメント
*Embody
この段落は削除されました。 - Gomuningen3mthコメント
This is very forced and stupid, and extremely unrealistic!
Rowena had lost her left kidney after the blaster shot through her. Helga was mentally broken when she saw the damage her friends had taken and Salazar ... well he would never be able to live normally again. The only reason he was alive, was due to his magic, which he had to use to constantly heal him. Thoughts of revenge started to appear in his mind and he thought about the dark magic book he found from an ancient Greek wizard, Herpo. - Gomuningen3mthコメント
No one says “sit down you bloke”
"Goodness, sit down you bloke. I do agree with him though. I understand these children must listen to the teachers, not us. We aren't students, strictly speaking. We are guests.", Salazar said. Here we see the character of all the founders of Hogwarts. Helga Hufflepuff holds all of them together, Godric Gryffindor is the brave one who likes to rush into things, Rowena is the brilliant one who knows how to talk to the others and Salazar is the snake who can either use poison or his words to achieve desired effects. - Gomuningen3mthコメント
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2.Megamind - Gomuningen3mthコメントCh 105 Chapter 105
- Gomuningen3mthコメントCh 11 Chapter 11: Doctrine
- Gomuningen4mthコメントCh 25 Complete domination
- Gomuningen4mthに返信 Judderbutter
Yes but he could at least increase his stats to superhuman levels by doing daily tasks etc. This dude just got his limitations without getting his strengths
"He has to release some of them, it's just too much for the current him." Thalia as she knelt down towards the heavily breathing Lucian. - Gomuningen4mthコメント
Don’t do it! Are you telling me that in the entirety of Greek mythology you could not find enough diverse monsters! Already you messed up once by saying they he killed the Stymphillian birds and ate their flesh when we know that in the PJ universe monsters disperse into ash when they are killed!
Yes - Gomuningen5mthコメント
Can’t blame her, she was born this way!
Yo, I don't know about y'all, but that little girl seemed a little racist to me. Hmm, also where dem power stones at? - Gomuningen5mthコメント
Are Wanda and Pietro stuck inside?
Sara got Pharaoh in his feelings😏🥰. Though I feel like I should mention something else considering what's being focused on this chapter. - Gomuningen5mth発表
After almost 1200 chapters both Kisuke and Yoroichi don’t really have any major power up and still haven’t reached transcendence, just some random mentions of new useful power systems. The MC goes to Orario but still the author NERFed the whole world’s power system saying that it makes poeople too dependent on gods etc. Instead of taking it as an opportunity to allow MC to power up by going through the levels. Author seems pathalogically averse to powering up the MC
- Gomuningen5mthコメント
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Option 2. A bit of system shenanigans once in a while is okay. No need to change anything. - Gomuningen5mthコメント
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Option 1. Wrap the Japan visit faster so that Mark gets back faster and gets working on the Killing joke.