22darthvadrulesall

Great story, author clearly put a lot of thought and hardwork in this fic. can t wait for new chapters.

I like this, kudos. keep up the good work.

Rayleigh nickname is Dark king not Pluton

Author san you should recheck your one piece canon knowledge Shusui is right now in thriller park not enma. enma is in wano.

Why the f is iceburg commenting about thousand sunny its not been created yet in this timeline.

I found this gem of a story very entertaining, and I can’t wait for Volume 2. I hope this isn’t abandoned. I also liked that the story was told from the MC’s perspective, but I’d love to see other characters’ POVs as well—like Doflamingo, Marines such as Garp, Sengoku, Akainu, Kizaru, and Aokiji, and other characters I feel should have more presence, like Robin, Big Mom, Kaido, Ace, etc.

IN last 5 or 6 chapter i felt a lot of writing to be either Written with assistance of ai or polished through ai pls keep in mind or you are going to drive your reader base away.

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It was gem among the webnovel trash. i love baby antics the most.