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rettghbhj1mth発表Hi Nine_Clouds . It is not bad idea to weiter your own novel, but you have 4 other fanfiction you currently write. So please do not forget to continue your fanfiction because the stories Arena currently well and the could develop in many ways. You should not to write 5 novels at the same time Arena to much and you should only write 4 at the same time
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Did she have not blue hair too?
"Are you tired?" Said another beautiful woman with a curved horn on top of her head. She wore pajamas with a 'bread' theme and had her silky green hair tied in twin tails. - rettghbhj6mthコメント
I think the scene from DMC5 when Nero's hand is cut off is appropriate
Blood poured out, and his complexion turned pale due to the excessive blood loss, but Arthur screamed, "Kuroka, run away!" There was no chance of them defeating this devil, and the best chance was for Kuroka to run away, reporting everything to Vali. He took out another sword, the Excalibur Ruler, the sword which disappeared during its creation. However, by using his family's connection and Vali's help, he found the sword. - rettghbhj7mthコメント
I think it looks the magic of Jack from Black clover.
He tried to concentrate, and a large sickle-like blade emerged from his forearm. The blade was sharp, and he could tell that it could easily cut his hotel room, so he quickly put it back. Still, it was too early to rest, so he tried to focus once again and created two sickles on his two hands. - rettghbhj8mthに返信 Mysticwolf
No I think it was an ability from "seven deadly sins" of someone of the demons.
In other words, it was like a space manipulation, where he could change the position of two people or things. - rettghbhj10mthコメント
Where is failure?
[Equipment: Eas(103), Frost(SS), Toolbox(SSS), White Ogre Mask(S), Yeoui(SSS+), Clark Kent's Glasses(SS), Stella(SSS+) Guardian Shield(SS+), Leviathan Axe(SS+), Switch Axe(SSS), Heavenly Soap] - rettghbhj1yrコメント
Hello Author I wanted to ask if you continue to write the story because you have not updated on fanfiction.net in since June 2022. If you don't continue, I would like to take over the story and continue it. The story is great and you can continue. I would like to receive feedback from you. [img=recommend]
Ch 11 Wind Drake's Fear! - rettghbhj1yrコメント
Hello Author I have some ideas for you. 1 We know that the main character get his first soul ring. As idea for his soul skill like sword birth from dxd or bleach when ichigo learns bankai through the training with Zangetsu. 2 His soul ring will be a spirit ring. 3 the immortal plant transforms into a human after it get the tribulation lightning from the pagoda and travel with the character. I hope you continue the web novel.
Ch 11 Wind Drake's Fear! - rettghbhj1yrコメント
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- Yu Yan (TDG/Black Spring) - rettghbhj1yrに返信 rettghbhjCh 82 Great War Ended
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Hi Author I have some ideas for the future of this story 1 hao yuhao get from the system the four season beads from martial peak and let the snow empress absorb so that snow empress evolves and control the weather/four seasons and time. Hao yuhao does not get the snow empress three ultimates as soul skill but create a martial art with the snow empress with a combination of haki and element control. 2 Ophis becomes his third spirit ring on the divine throne of genesis and end. He get. And he beat great red and create a soul ring of great reds soul fragment for his eyes. That's all for now.
Ch 82 Great War Ended - rettghbhj3yrコメントCh 613 Next World
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