This story is not for me. just looked over the chapters that was out on patreon and this story do have yuri. Daphne and Tracy are lovers in this and that was what made me skip this one and unsubscribe from patreon. I prefer when the girls in a harem story has a sister like relationship, and not lovers. Makes it more like polyamory than harem which I dont like.

I was right. Just checked later chapters and Cindy seems to be a spider person and also the love intrest. Just hoped it would be a more original setting. Why I prefer when Peter is the only spider person in the story is that it makes it more unique and his love intrest should be more of a civillian type, because that is what he usually needs. That is why MJ is so important to Peter. I will stop here. Its well written, but not for me.

Hoped for atleast someone solo spiderman before everyone gets spiderpowers. Guess I was wrong because herr is Cindy Moon in the first episode

I like the story, the only thing you should put out is the yuri tag. I hoped that there wasn’t any in this and in futurue episodes I hope it will be lesser of it.

This story is called ”delenda est” and might be stolen from there. This author also uses patron to take completed stories to earn money.

This is delenda est on fanfiction.net. I don’t know if he is the same as the author who wrote this story.

It was really fun in the beginning and I liked that the MC didn’t shit on the OG MC yun Che. But after the MC’s sister got introduced it droppet in intrest for me. Then the multiverse chatgroup came and it got worse. I thought this was about ATG and not other universes. That’s what got me in the beginning and I Thought MC would get more original girlfriends from that world that Yun Che didn’t interract with or was his enemies in the original story, but it seems it’s more like the multiverse chatgroup including his sister that are his romantic intresst. I wish you good luck but this was it for me with this story.

Lost all intrest with previous chapter. Why introduce the sister character. I admit it’s not overused but it’s boring. I also hope she is not a romantic intrest, that is just desturbing on so many levels. Atleast build your MC more first, his adventures and how he gets more powerful. This felt like you had no idea how to move the story forward and just created the sister character.

I really like this story just for the simple facit that harry isn’t an antihero/villain in this story. I hope he will be the hero type. When it comes to the romance I really like it and can’t wait to see his other girls join. When it comes to romance I would prefer to focus this on the MC and not on the others so much. The last thing I also hope is that the girls in the harem are not bi. I would prefer for them to see eachother more like sisters that are closer than friends but not lovers. Would like them to just have romanic and sexual feelings for Harry. Like I said, this story so far is really good and one of my favorite on WebNovel.

Probably the same was you would have reacted to a harem fic. I know when you have a single pairing in a fic it will always be other couples in the story. That is the main reason I don’t like single pairing. For example take Rouge in this story, she was on her way to getting together with the MC but now i know she must have someone else and yes I am immature because I don’t care about relationships outside the MC. In that case you can just write a harem story if you will include side couples. The only difference is that the girls like the same guy.

Started reading this when harem was still a tag. Author then ”changed” his mind to just gwen. If it was just 1 leave gwen with Peter and give mc someone like natasha or felicia. They are atleast goodlooking. Gwen is so ugly to me in her halfshaved feminist hairstyle and I hate ghostspider, such a boring version of spiderman.

Have been reading the story up to chapter14 on fanfiction.net. The story is just pure smut. And for perple like me that finds yuri annoying this story is full of it. Natasha even sleeps with her own sister. While they might not be bloodrelated she is still her sister witch makes it incest. The tags should be: harem, yuri, incest, pure smut, op mc. So if you don`t like these it is not for you.

What ruins this story for me are the yuri vibes. When I read a story that says it's a harem storie I want the girls to be there for the mc. Yuri has always been my biggest gripe as a harem fan. Like 90% of the harem stories always have yuri in them. What I feel when I see yuri in a harem storie is just a waste of space. First of all why even do you need the mc just pair all the girls with eachother and he can watch them in the corner like a true cuck. It's not hot or an intresting consept, it's just annoying.

Must say that I really like how dense he is. Much prefer this to all the arrogant selfcentered types that are so popular nowdays. [img=update]

Not my kind of story, but it's an intresting story. My main gripe with the story is when he goes around giving powers to all people around him and also makes them expand their lifes. What I am most tired of is giving MJ spider-mans powers. I do not understand why she can't be her own hero and has to be a spider-man copy. Plus the romance between them is really dull. But I also prefer harem and I do not find love between people which are not the mc intresting. But what I can say is that I like that he is heroic and not the typical villain character.

Why did you give her spider-mans powers. I am so tired of the spiderverse. Just makes Peter so irrellevent.

Should put a warning about the villan mc. he doesnt care about anyone except himself, he is arrogant and wishes that young children can just go under a rock and die. If it is one I want to just die it is the mc.

What is it with all These authors likning little girls, when you have so many beautiful women in the world of btth.

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