SithLordKalakan
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SithLordKalakan2yrに返信 Theodoric_JagerCh 2 Loki- SithLordKalakan2yrに返信 Travis_BtmbCh 2 Loki
- SithLordKalakan2yrに返信 Theodoric_Jager
Yep, the same guy with multiple accounts. If I do make another chapter for them then I'll probably rewrite them.
[I read the first four chapters of that shitty Game of Thrones: Dragon Overlord and was horribly disappointed, so i decided to make my own Targaryen MC] - SithLordKalakan2yrに返信 Theodoric_Jager
Hey bud, I see you wanted to see my fanfics update.
[I read the first four chapters of that shitty Game of Thrones: Dragon Overlord and was horribly disappointed, so i decided to make my own Targaryen MC] - SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 PinnacleExistenceCh 1 A Brief Meeting
- SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 Lord_Shiva_
Because he'd be a God and the story would be boring.
"Lastly, I want my gift to be the power of persuasion, through eye contact and words, i can control humans, vampires, shapeshifters, and werewolves. to make it somewhat fair, they can overpower my persuasion if they have enough willpower" - SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 Golden_dragon444Ch 1 A Brief Meeting
- SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 AvaxxDarhkCh 1 A Brief Meeting
- SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 Ballad
- SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 BalladCh 1 A Brief Meeting
- SithLordKalakan3yr発表
This is such a let down for me, I was enjoying this fanfic a lot but Chapter 13 ruined the entire story. The MC gets three wishes and years of training but he can't defeat three vampires and they didn't even use their gifts. THREE FUCKING WISHES, I don't want to hear this shit about them being over a thousand years old, he has three wishes and he got treated like a bitch. Why do so many authors make an amazing story just to nerf the MC in the first fucking fight? If the author did it to make the MC a vampire, you could have waited and made him a vampire later so in a romantic way by making Rosalie bite him on their wedding day or something. I'm sorry author, I genuinely loved this novel but watching an MC with three wishes get bitch slapped like a pussy is terrible writing.
- SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 GuyTB
Your a 100% Simp, aren't you.
Bella became even redder from embarrassment and we ended up spending the rest of the school day without saying a single word to each other. - SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 Theodoric_JagerCh 3 Slavery & Shadows
- SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 Theodoric_JagerCh 3 Slavery & Shadows
- SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 amaturewriter
I literally just apologized and instead of accepting it, you keep beating a dead horse by going on and on about it.
この章は削除されました。 - SithLordKalakan3yrに返信 amaturewriter
Your reply was deleted, i'm guessing it was super offensive.
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