SpaceZeph

just finished the binge read... THIS STORY IS GREAT! Dear author, you are doing great! I loveyour changes to characters and their development. I can't wait to see how this year's plots will play out. Thank you for this great story!

Tftc!

There might be slightly altered rituals, just like the one for the messenger just now, where the system incorporates the naruto world's laws and nature

How about Dan Kato? Tsunades ex-boyfriend who has high lvl speed, taijutsu & he could teach the Spirit Transformation Technique

1. Heads up for newcomers The MC, Loki, doesn't know the HP Plot, but a lot of LOTM lore. The beginning can feel sluggish and weird, maybe even annoying at times, but give it time until chapter 10, that's where the fun begins! Loki doesn't have a cheat in the traditional kind of way... no system, no goldenfinger, no wishes. Instead he seems to be the only Error Pathway Beyonder. Also, personality wise, Loki feels like the love child of Danitz & Amon. 2. Review / My opinion So far (star of year 3) we still haven't seen much of the beyonder world, but it has started, I reckon this year is the prelude to beyonder shenanigans. The incorporation of Beyonder into Wizarding World is greatly executed. The interactions and bonds between the supporting cast and the MC feel genuine and well done. A little bit of plot armor here and there, but that's also a bit of "Adam's" fault. xD There are a lot of similarities between Loki and Klein, paying homage to the "original" by taking fan-favourite mysteries, names, items, etc. The story is highly addictive! I'm really bad at this but yea... TL;DR - Give the story at least 10 chapters to get you hooked. Follow Loki, the personality love-child of Danitz & Amon, on his shenanigans and adventures to liberate the money of other people, while living Ash Ketchum's wet dream by petting all the XXXXX-Creatures along the way! Highly recommended, but sadly severely underestimated story. Dunno how to end this, sooo bye?

F this, ain't gonna wait, p@tr30n here i come!

Damn I binged this book in 2 days and now I thirst for more!!! This is such a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter...

Thanks for the chapter! Love how the prophecy is about twinkly wrinkly instead of tom. Can't wait for more chapters

that's just ridiculous, advertising your own work in the comment section of another's work?