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Both i think? If there any girl let touching another lirien then both

The series have a lot cliches.

Why do girls let random people touch them, writer? and how pathetic mc

So the first 70 episode review What I am going to say now may be a spoiler for you. So read it if you want - - - - - - The bad parts of the series: 1. Mc is not chad. He is a completely naive stupid simp character. I don't understand why the author made mc like that, he could make him smart if he wanted. The character is not a 13-14 year old child, he is a 20 year old individual,adult. So it's ridiculous that the character is still stupid under development. He deliberately makes him stupid and then decides to quit the series because no one likes this mc. Of course they won't read it if you make mc like this (Author later returned to writing) 2. The young master-type enemy in the Chinese series is also in this series. I understand that an enemy is necessary for the series to progress, but at least he should have a purpose according to Mc. Guys do you know why he's an enemy? Mc rejected his offer. That's it. I mean, he doesn't have a grudge against him from before. He thinks 'he rejected my proposal in front of everyone, he embarrassed me, so he should die' this is ridiculous. Nobody laughed behind his back, there was even another guild master at the same level next to him, the guild master that mc admired. Mc even rejected him, but he perceives it as if only he was rejected. I mean, if he thinks 'i lost the biggest potential, if this happens, the guild that mc joined will get stronger in a short time, so i need to kill mc before he gets stronger' if he thinks that like at least there would be a logic, but he is completely unnecessarily hostile. That's why there are cliche drama like Chinese in this series. These things are turning people off from the series 3. There are parts that are not explained and skipped. When Mc first enters the dungeon, items do not drop from the enemies he kills. Actually they do, but an invisible girl takes the items. The problem here is how does that invisible girl do it? She gets the items before they are even seen. Also, even if the mc realizes that he is being watched, he perceives it as his own imagination, this part seemed ridiculous. And guild master there and high levels but nobody notice the girl, a little notice but then they forgot. I don't remember any other part. The reason why gods give power to humans is probably because in the future there will be beings at the cosmic level or higher, and each god is looking for support for their pantheon. That's probably why they give power to humans. 4. The gods tell mc not to waste time, you need to get stronger fast. At first Mc says that he needs to get stronger soon, that there is a great danger coming to our world, that he needs to protect his loved ones, but he still wastes his time. For example, he goes to school and wastes time. He gets project assignments at school, or spends time with his girlfriend, or attends events, in short, he acts as if the catastrophe is unimportant. He's living his life. 5. In the 50th chapters, thanks to his ex-girlfriend's mother, mc decides that he will no longer be stuck in the past and will be more logical masculine, but in the next chapter, a ridiculous organization comes and blackmails mc. And he falls for it like an idiot. That organization is the organization of the young master-type guild master in the cliché Chinese series, the organization of the person I mentioned above (actually his wife's organization, but you know, it's the same thing). Probably the author employed this method to remove the ex-husband of the MC's girlfriend from the series. but the ex-husband was still talking about revenge before he left. So he is still not gone from the series, we will see in the future for sure.(note he threw a molotov at MC's girlfriend later and he is still not caught) 6. The yuri plot that makes no sense to the story. Mc's best girlfriend is a lesbian. And this person is in love with Mc's sister. In later episodes they spend time together and become lovers. And it's constantly talked about. I don't understand why the author is doing such a thing, it doesn't add anything to the story. Readers who hate Yuri can leave the series for these parts. I hope there will not be such a relationship between Anna and Serana, Anna, who joined in the last chapters. 7. Again, it's MC's own stupidity, but no matter, his ex-girlfriend is cheating on him. Just because of his mom's hospital bills. She sleeps with someone just for money and mc blames himself for it. He wishes he'd known. I mean, not exactly for this situation, but anyway, you'll understand when you read it. But I'll tell you this, she's definitely guilty but mc keeps apologizing. The good parts of the series: There is nothing good about the series, don't read it, it's a waste of time. - - - Just kidding 1. The author writes really well. The writing plot is similar to the series "my three wifes beautiful vampires". If I didn't see the author's name, I would say the same person wrote it. Whether it's the characters' own thoughts or mc's behavior (they are similar except that there is no yandere and mc not smart and chad), so people who like mtwbv will probably like this series. 2. The episodes are getting better and better. The writer is improving in writing 3. Unique characters. Each one has different side characters. 4. Solo leveling theme, people who like solo leveling may like this series. 5. A harem in the modern world, that is, a different concept other than isekai harems. It's good. There aren't many of this kind. World background: classic dungeon series background, there are guilds, there are doors, there are monsters. You already know what it is from the solo leveling style webtoons that come out every month many times That's why my score is 2.5/5 Character designs: even though mc is an idiot, the side characters not feel to you side characters That's why my score is 3.5/5 (I would have given it 4 score, if the Chinese young master type person was not in series) Spelling: English is not my first language but I didn't see many mistakes, I read the series breathlessly That's why my score is 4.5/5 Story progression: slow paced, more slice of life and dungeon style. And you can see where the story is going That's why my score is 3/5 Episode update: there was a break but otherwise very good That's why 4/5 My overall score for this series: 3.5/5 I hope this article was useful to you

Why doesn't Mc use his eyesight skill to find out where the girls are?

Mother of all and you wrote him? Shoul'nt be her? Cuz Mother a woman

I was just saying in the previous episode that he's finally going to become Chad lol. But still he is naive

To be honest I know I've been complaining about the series from the beginning. Your series score is now 6.5/10 in my eyes. Because of a lot of cliché drama scenes and mc being unnecessarily kind and stupid. Otherwise the story is pretty good. My three wifes is very similar to the this series. It is very similar in the way it is writing skill, if i didin't see author name of this series i definetly thought victor wrote it. He(mc in this series) just needs to kill those who try to hit on him around the women he loves. Like Yandere. If you make chad the mc (which I hope after this episode he will be) and don't let the cliché ex-boyfriend or old man masters into the guild because the mc should be the only man around woman guild. So if the story is more monsters and dungeons and slice of life etc, the story will be 8/10 directly in my eyes. Which I rarely give this score. So improving the characters, improving the story (eliminating Chinese drama clichés) will benefit you a lot. Right now my three wives is 7/10 in my eyes because the last episodes are not as good as before. Anyway, I hope I made myself clear.

The fact that mc is a simp and a netorare lover. some people have compared mc to mc in my three wifes but it's nothing like that. The mc in my three wifes was a yandere. He wouldn't let any man near the women he loved and he would kill anyone who had feelings for his wives. Look at this mc. He brought the man he made a deal with to someone he loved. What will the author do next? Will the old man set up his own harem among the girls in the guild? And mc's lame apology to his ex-girlfriend... yeah, he's a real simp and an idiot. Victor is nothing compared to this MC.

Very well, not only forgave her, but strengthened her? Did you really give his ex his first empowerment when he had a girlfriend? The series really going downhill