Martial_Pursuit

That requires good writing.

Good just not enough, the name I could ignore but the story flow is odd. The MC arrogance, the telling rather than showing during combat and how characters interacting is odd. Since it's set in Ippo universe during the late 90's and with MC being half Japanese there's should be conflict around how he behaves and with being a Hafu that would makes the world feel more alive. Not my cup of tea and won't continue reading it but keep up your work.

Then use Romani name or an Irish one to reflect the character ancestry.

Rewrite, new book, Pick Rider era and pick top three built story from it. Start with Kuuga make him earn the power and learning about the responsibility with it. Then you upgraded him when Kabuto arrive if you want conflict add the other rider from Kabuto arrival a dark version of those riders. Finish it off with Decade and fighting along side other Kamen Riders defeating Shocker Multiverse Empire from conquering Marvel along with the other heroes and Villains to close the story. If you get harem limit it to only four maximum more than that will be hard to write, too lazy to think just stick to two women. Like Rogue will Ties him to the Mutant and have a civilian girlfriend Like MJ or someone to act as an anchor so he didn't forget why he become a Kamen Rider in the first place. It's all up to you how you want to proceed just throwing out ideas and lessen the use of AI, it's hurt your quality.

Did you even read he was a professional fighter, now couldn't e en beat a kid, Martial skill is the same as long as there's pair of leg and arm.

Why compare you writing with other fanfic that comparing trash with trash, just because it's a fanfic doesn't mean it couldn't be well written. Doesn't need professional or polished just well written structurally, the comments is not tearing you down its a criticism wanting you to improve.

Boring and very dragging, the grind can be fun to read if it is better written but its felt like a chore reading it and MC chakra is way to nerf.

the story doesn't follow the world logic itself, characters aren't speaking they way they suppose too and most are telling rather than showing.

Way too OP MC and the MC is too Young, personally if the author starts with the character being older then having the life simulator work for once a week the the progress would feel more natural as we could see the growth.

ah yes all Asian are Chinese, low IQ reply you.