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the story is ok..it's just the writer can't remember the name of the character😅 it's always changing..he/she put meaning in chinese name..it mix up and coz confusing to the reader..the story plot is fine just fix their name and stay to it!dont change it every chapter👌

han yu say's his daugther in law,its his wife!

i like this novel♥️

i already know that,what i mean is you would say she know jun for 2 week but it almost a months has past...theirs a lot of loofholes on the story...sorry if you feel offended..what i want is for you to fix the timeline of each plot

here goes the time line again!!!shes with jun for 2 weeks?!soooo confusing!mind the timeline pls.! it makes the story confusing!!!

please fix the timeline of the story!its soo confusing, like yuholea is 16yrs.old and she practise talisman for 16yrs. but her parents in the pass drop her to the old man when she was 10yrs.old... like what the?!!!🤔🤔

the name of the character is always changing jiang xing to jiang yao?what exacly are their real name?!!!the story is ok but pls dont change their names!!!

quit confusing🤔i thought its new character in the story..

the story is fine,but the male characters name is changing from ye fan-steve-novita...its quit confusing🤔

nice one gong ling👌next chap pls....