Inkybear
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Inkybear10 months agoに返信 Rascals_dreamTheres a big difference between 1life/sec and 10 life/10sec recovery.
- Inkybear2 years agoコメント
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- Inkybear2 years agoコメント
Yup….. this episode made me drop the whole series now. Cringey chapter
- Inkybear3 years agoコメント
He had 4 blocks, not 4 steals in the previous chapters. Better edit that while its early
- Inkybear3 years agoコメント
Ooofff, first page grammar errors are tough to ignore.
- Inkybear3 years ago発表
This is the only novel ive read the first 6 chapters in (not even short chapters) and the story is still mysteriously shit. Dropping it
この本は削除されました。 - Inkybear3 years ago発表
Good novel. The writers grammar and storytelling is great. He/she adds proper description of the scene to paint the image , and the main protagonist is like-able. Good job.
この本は削除されました。 - Inkybear3 years agoに返信 the_god_of_plot
Yeah. The indian english sentence structure around those chapters bothered me so much.
- Inkybear3 years ago発表
I cant get past the poor english grammatical errors. I know the author is from india but it really bothers me. The lack of vocabulary and sentence structures make it feel like the characters are all 5 year olds. "Master, what master call Yunyun for?" Grave looked at Yunyun and speak. "Playing time is over."
- Inkybear3 years agoコメント
Bad grammar and poor spelling errors. Tsk tsk tsk