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the sin of laziness

2018-05-04 入りましたFrance
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  • achile
    achile1d
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    ?

    Ch 17 A small sample
    Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
    テレビ · Nathe07
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  • achile
    achile1d
    に返信 Ero_sennin106

    Very weak

    Ch 59 Chapter 59 I'm famous?
    DxD: A Blonde Boy
    アニメ·コミックス · Vengeance9578
    detail
  • achile
    achile1d
    に返信 Tarawa

    Plot hole

    Ch 75 Looming Shadows
    Harry Potter The New Lord Black
    書籍·文学 · Nebula_Scribe
    detail
  • achile
    achile1d
    に返信 Nefistoteles

    I hope

    Ch 161 Expertise of Beast Taming
    Witcher: The Half Elf
    書籍·文学 · LIl_wretch
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  • achile
    achile2d
    コメント

    How has the other book changed on your account?

    Ch 1 Chapter 1 The Coder
    Marvel: Greatest Power Is Luck
    映画 · LORD_INDRA_
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  • achile
    achile2d
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    I don't understand the end of this chapter

    Ch 238 238 Harry Potter:The winning House and The Dark Lord.
    I Stream DC on Marvel
    アニメ·コミックス · Mr_Aizen
    detail
  • achile
    achile3d
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    Its was very long

    Ch 48 Chapter 48 - Cintra 41!
    The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!
    アニメ·コミックス · RaccoonLeague
    detail
  • achile
    achile3d
    コメント
    Ch 66 Souls and Hell
    As a Lucifer in DxD
    アニメ·コミックス · Vegeta_Kakarot
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  • achile
    achile3d
    に返信 Juhiko

    Plot hole

    Ch 25 Meetings
    The Fifth Hokage Is Naruto's Uncle
    アニメ·コミックス · Dienekes
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  • achile
    achile5d
    コメント

    Repost ?

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: The last giant
    Elden Ring: The moon lord
    ゲーム · _SKYFALL_
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  • achile
    achile5d
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    Can a common mage create a robot like the Pacifistas? Why dop enemies? A mage isn't even that strong in close combat and can survive against Madara even as a child is laughable. You nerf the MC and boost these enemies to make it epic and all, but it makes no sense. If you want to make a story about the hero's rise to power, don't give him Madara's powers.

    Ch 47 Chapter 47 - Cintra 40!
    The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!
    アニメ·コミックス · RaccoonLeague
    detail
  • achile
    achile5d
    に返信 LesendeTaube

    She deserves it

    Ch 73 Chaos in Gryffindor Tower
    Harry Potter The New Lord Black
    書籍·文学 · Nebula_Scribe
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  • achile
    achile6d
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    Time skip

    Ch 46 Chapter 46 - Cintra 39!
    The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!
    アニメ·コミックス · RaccoonLeague
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  • achile
    achile6d
    に返信 Sir_Stronghold

    I thinks Yasaka is the flashback

    Ch 56 Chapter 56 Bo*bs
    DxD: A Blonde Boy
    アニメ·コミックス · Vengeance9578
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  • achile
    achile7d
    に返信 Anonuserread

    Plot hole and forced story

    Ch 43 Chapter 43: Emotional Rias!
    DxD: A World Where T*tties Defy Gravity
    アニメ·コミックス · Orael
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  • achile
    achile9d
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    Good, i want a story

    Ch 2 The Aftermath
    The Son Of Demeter
    書籍·文学 · TheDevilOfTheRhine
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  • achile
    achile10d
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    Good

    Ch 62 Unexpected Encounters
    Harry Potter The Serpent
    書籍·文学 · Infinity_Weaver
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  • achile
    achile11d
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    Good

    Ch 25 Chapter 24: Imminent fight
    Transmigrate to the world of The Lord of the Rings?
    映画 · Ax_nevermay_cry
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  • achile
    achile12d
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    Why all the pointless drama, Allen can wipe the floor with Voldemort and he gets caught in one of Voldemort's traps. Even an avada kedabra can't kill him, so an explosion weaker than the Hulk's blows can't hurt him. Why bother protecting himself? Why use spells when he can do anything with his body?

    Ch 230 230 Harry Potter: In the forbidden forest Voldemort is not to be underestimated.
    I Stream DC on Marvel
    アニメ·コミックス · Mr_Aizen
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  • achile
    achile13d
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    Its so long and boring

    Ch 43 Chapter 43 - Cintra 36!
    The Witcher - Uchiha Madara!
    アニメ·コミックス · RaccoonLeague
    detail