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the good old days of my bad ass image of madara shattered at this moment..... (sigh)

yes i know I've reread chapter 1-3 and read the rest of the chapters, its a very well made background i must say. Looking forward to it for more.

yes i skipped the part where it was said gildarts was told by the old man to ethan, sry for giving a wrong comment

oh sry misread your novel i was just skimming the entire thing tbh coz its so much info dump. dont worry I'll take back my words ethan is not SI. I hope we could come in a truce

at first i thought he does not have prior knowledge on fairytail since he was an orphan much less runaway orphan to boot. while i can understand its hard to make a very consistent background for a self insert mc in a fanfiction, i must say this ever changing background kills the prior interest that one would expect when reading the synopsis. To think a run away orphan still has the pleasure to watch a series of episodes in fairytail to knkw enough about gildarts? isnt it questionable?

earlier was it a typo? 2 chapters ago the ranking list says he's the number 1 player at lvl 21 while alice was no.2 player whose level at lvl 19.

I like angy but she's just too naive and nice that I feel like she should just remain pure and and innocent. You know if she dies and Gustav has already developed feelings for her, then he would have one more reason to burn the world right?

Could have been good if author stayed the same way he has been for the last 290 chapters of this fanfic. Sadly he isn't anymore therefore it's not worth to read the chapters above 290 if your not planning to spend a single money. why? it's because chapters above 290 are way short since author has cut many words of each chapter, you can only view the complete chapters of 291 and above only on his patreon account which you will need to spend real money. I'm not saying that i don't want to support the author or the novel is really bad, its just that my only concern is why would the author post those incomplete chapters in here, and we readers who expect an update would unconditionally open it only to see a chapter that was cut and parts of it are skipped to the point that we don't even know what happened. If this is the case, why would we free readers read these kinds of chapters, we might as well dropped it and find a new one. An example is chapter 294 when mc is teaching orihime about her talent and then all of a sudden, when you scroll down to find what happened, you find him already teaching chad about his powers and did not mentioned that mc has finished teaching orihime. All you will see is periods over and over again starting from chapter 291. It's sad because this work is only a fanfiction, though the story development is quite amazing that it is on par with some original novels out there, but still this is just a fanfic, there is no way this will be an original novel, and profiting from it is not allowed even if the original authors of the said animes that was used in this fanfic does not sue the author for using their own creation for his own profit. I've seen fanfics out there that is more appealing when it comes to story development and world background than this one and even they don't make any profit from it, even if they do they would not do it like this, posting incomplete chapters here in webnovel while posting the complete chapters on his/her own patreon account using this app as an advertising platform. Me rating this fanfic 4.2 is already giving it my respect for the all 290 chapters that I've read on this fanfic and i hope the author won't continue doing this anymore. I know that author has financial issues if he's doing this but the mere fact of him posting incomplete chapters here means he does want to want free readers like us to read his works anymore, For a complete a review: writing quality - 5/5 (story is very well though out and is very understandable) updates - 1/5 ( updates slowly in the past 290 chapters, now its quite fast because chapters above 290 is incomplete, you wont be able to read it anymore since you won't even understand what would happened, core parts are always skipped) story development - 5/5 (very good and well thought out story, it is very interesting on the first 290 chapters, now its not) character design - 5/5 (mc is ruthless to his enemies but very protective on his friends, smart and cunning) world background -5/5 (the anime worlds used are well thought out starting from demon slayer world, to one piece world and to bleach world, plot development can easily be connected since mc gets to train his skills in demon slayer world, trains his spirit/haki on one piece while in bleach he gets to showoff how powerful he is) In conclusion, everything would have been perfect if author didn't decide to post incomplete chapters on this app and advertises his complete work in patreon. He could have just signed a contract with webnovel so that readers could avail privilege membership on this fanfic if he really needs money.