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Darte

Darte

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2018-04-18 入りましたBrazil
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  • Darte
    Darte2 months ago
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    é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso, é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso é tão ruim que não vou nem perder tempo traduzindo isso

  • Darte
    Darte2 months ago
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    it has the usual flaws, it doesn't explain the powers he gains, the story is accelerated and the author simply tries to make him seem like an intelligent villain but honestly Mc seems like a typical villain who will be defeated at any moment, I don't particularly like Death Note but uses Light Yagami's name as MC and him being stupid is a lack of respect for the series.

  • Darte
    Darte4 months ago
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    In short, a total waste of time, nothing simply happens, a bunch of people talking about random things, no story, no plot, no meaning and the characters look like 10 year olds arguing.

  • Darte
    Darte4 months ago
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    the story was very good until chapter 30, with some flaws but nothing serious, but after that it became strong with a lot of irrelevant unnecessary information such as the daimyo's part there were 4 chapters or so that have no relevance to the story and other than that there is still the unrealistic scenario of several extras hitting on Tsunade so that the main one gets a little jealous? I don't know why he doesn't give a shit about her

  • Darte
    Darte5 months ago
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    The story is good, the reading is pleasant and the MC is not op as soon as he is born, but I will only give it 3 stars because Shisui's personality is depressing and out of place. The author tries to make him similar to Gojo, he killed the character and is so unbearable to read that I had to skip all the chapters he appears in so I wouldn't stop reading this story. I can't wait for him to commit suicide soon.

  • Darte
    Darte6 months ago
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    Honestly the story is actually pretty good, but I lost interest in the crew members he chose, except for Robin, the rest are just random trash.

  • Darte
    Darte6 months ago
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    This fanfic is an example of how a wrong choice of word can ruin a person's desire to continue reading. Up until chapter 14, there are some standard flaws, silly things that don't ruin the reading and it's even pleasant. The idea is interesting until chapter 15. In this chapter, I lost the desire to read. To make an arrogant character without knowing what he's doing will only create another typical Chinese MC with the young master syndrome.

  • Darte
    Darte6 months ago
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    The person doesn't even bother to read what they copy, I believe that even the original MTL should be easier to read, it's basically a copy and paste straight from the MTL

  • Darte
    Darte6 months ago
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    mas um personagem emo com o poder de gojo, e poder dele nem é isso tudo na Marvel, não sei que moda é esse de fazer personagem com a síndrome do jovem mestre, isso é uma tradução de uma mtl eu espero, o resumo serie "temos que recruta-lo" e "com um sorriso sinistro" só tem isso na maioria dos capítulos

  • Darte
    Darte8 months ago
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    My friend, if you can't do something pleasant, it's better to do nothing. My friend, if you can't do something pleasant, it's better to do nothing.