greencross

Continuity errors, and many other errors, I will stop reading it until it is rewritten properly.

who the fuck is belemub

it was time

and they arrived at the stardou forest, don't give me that bullshit that they're going to find the yinyang well

The story has potential, but it needs a lot of editing to make it more readable.

His lack of strength is his own fault, he doesn't try to improve in Taijutsu to open the fighting gacha, and he doesn't practice any other style to open new gachas, the ground or electric type would have suited him well, and well he also has bad luck, in the Norma type he hasn't gotten extreme speed, that would help a lot

There are several points that I don't like 1. Why if he has the essence of the archmage and the alchemist, he doesn't get cured? At no point is it said that it is a curse from some god 2. What's happening with his attitude, is it affecting his essences or what? That thing about letting the world burn is going to seem like his famous phrase with so many times he says it

What town did you go to?

I hope that at least in this story, Tang Hao and his sect are not idiots, and that Tang Hao gives problems to MC and Ah Yin just because of how beautiful Ah Yin is.

The truth is that the world he chose surprises me, the author must really like the games created by Project Moon, since I didn't even know about them until now.