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I don't understand... I've never seen a novel with an MC more useless than this novel. He is always losing, always grievously wounded with the need for OTHERS to save his life. No matter how strong you get, you always need others to keep from getting killed. He's the biggest daddy's boy ever. I don't know why the author does this... If you don't have a problem with all that I mentioned above, in addition to extremely homosexual things (in an amount so large that it bothers), several scenes that force the reader's hatred with a "pre-NTR", and the author closing almost all the saga endings with a totally forced and meaningless plot armor, you will really like this novel, because despite all this annoying shit, it has very good jokes, and a very different plot than usual. It's the first time I see such a problem in a novel, that the author has a brilliant mind for a good plot and jokes, being perfect in the development of the story, without being too slow or too fast (which is very rare to see lately), but the author's personality being carried into the book ended up spoiling everything. I'm not talking about arrogance and narcissism, that's silly and it's even funny... I'm talking about the extreme homosexual things and the extreme dependence of the MC for ANYTHING, even to stay alive. (No kidding, I've seen about 3 MC fights, that someone outside of the fight had to tell the MC what he was doing right, and what wasn't working... Like... couldn't he see it himself?) Anyways...5 stars for the author's mind, 1 for his personality. average of 3

This guy's father is not going to come out of nowhere and save him or he will miraculously make it out alive again, right author? Please... I've already given Sivan...

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I thought the novel was incredible, and I was always curious to read the next chapter. Even the author made a serious mistake, in my opinion. As much as it has a main female character, the novel is MAINLY Male leading. Lyrica was introduced since the beginning of the series, there was always evidence of romance with her, but it was always postponed. After a long time, Nan tian appears chasing MC, being a perfect prototype for women (the most beautiful thing in the world, he never had an interest in women, he even hides his face so as not to let his enemies (women) see how beautiful he is) . So far so good, because she had other signs of men falling in love with MC, and since she is a beautiful woman, is perfectly normal. This until the Watchman appears, and cause a "trauma". After that the author practically started to force Nan tian down his throat, pushing Lyrica away, and making the romance between nantian and the MC totally forced, with continuous needs to stay close, cute jokes and with double (and mostly disgusting) jokes happening all over moment ... Honestly there are a lot of episodes that I started to just skip 80% of it just because of the forced bar, and Shiro's extremely shy and forced and shy new personality. I mean, I can forgive the author if more than 50% of the people who read are women. But I am sure that more than 80% are men. Are you really putting together a "perfect" male character for a romance made mainly for men? I would understand if Nan Tian had appeared in the place of lyrica at the beginning of the story, until then the bond of both would be justifiable. But seriously, Lyrica was thrown aside ?? I find it really disappointing for a novel that I really liked to have gone so badly. Because of how it started I think it is unfair to give only 3 stars, but after the watchman I also think it is unfair to give 4 stars or more.