soleram67

The story hsas potential but unfortunately is too tiring to read as all is written in conversational, so it is like reading a script than a story as a whole. I hablve to drop it after few chapters

The plot is very cliche but with lots of loopholes. I only read few chapters and decided to drop it. From the underage allowed to drink, the ML that seems have amneska atrended the birthday and don't remember the age of the FL, from the absence of the father on the important birthday. And so many more. Appreciate the efforts of writing it though

The writer should be more sensible in writing. Hannah is 16 rite? how come she us allowed to drink alcohol and that in the presence of the adults?

can we just gjve AVA s real man. This Dylan realky is a sissy

This author is sick. any man lay a hand on a woman is sickening and yet the author wants the reader to later understand and like him?. drop this novel

it is derrick

Maybe it is Derrick his cousin?

Just a simple novel with simple characters. The FL is so annoying, and selfish. I just have to drop the book unfortunately as it circled around

It just doesn't makevsense. Martha is the award winner this year and she isn't the FL or 2nd FL in the new movie but thus unknown Vivian?. please be consistent and more thoughtful author, you disrespect the award winner and your own character pen

stupid that is. ot a trade