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Is there going to be incest?

I remember there was a chapter after the system leveled up and it showed his stats that he now had room for 25 students?

The evil repelling talisman can’t he make it himself and how come they cost 1 mid grade when I coast 1 inferior grade before. I think you named the talisman wrong. Isn’t it the golden something he used to defend against the snake what you meant to say?

The constant gender mistakes are annoying. Started back with Claire now Milky please no more it’s a simple thing to remember and fix.

13 year old drinking wine and your whole description of her makes it sound like an older person, someone at least as old if not older then the MC. The way she talks is almost more mature then a 13 year old would talk.

Your story is reallly similar to super gene. From the teleporting to another world to the first soul he gets the levels of genes and needing to eat to get stronger etc. so far there is little difference in the two stories and super gene has something like 3000 chapters.

Is this still getting updated?

Are you still writing the book about a single dad who starts a food truck then a restaurant and gets a new gf who was the girl that liked him in school?

Forgot to mention about pregnant woman drinking during childbirth anyone from earth would know this is bad yet he keeps letting her drink…

I’m on ch 96 so far a pretty good story but for a reincarnated person from earth who was supposed to be the head of a large business then the MC is not using his knowledge to the full potential. I get the business aspect of it but most people could figure out how to improve tools, weapons, strategy, technology etc from a medieval time to something more modern. Like even making a basic cannon since he is going to be fighting lots. Electricity, windmills, farming tools, axels and spring for wagons, rubber wheels come to mind. There was mention of a magical world yet the only magical thing so far is the MC has mind control and very limited at that. There is mention of archmages but they don’t seem to do anything magical besides making potions which to me is a fancy way to say doctor/pharmacist or better yet alchemist. There is no talk of schools either like at all that’s a basic thing to implement to improve things over time. These are just some ideas. Also don’t forget that his wife from eath was supposed to of crossed over but MC has no thoughts about it at all. These are just some ideas.