GrapeLord69

Boo from open season

I want more updates this is one if the best stories ive been reading so far

Nvm

Y such a big nerf

Tower of god??

Dont take none of to heart just keep writing and youll eventually become a great writer. Artist never created a master peice in their first few creations.

Im not a writer so i cant realy help in that regard i just felt like it was all happening fast but its still a good story and doing better than anything i could write

Im not a writer so i cant realy help in that regard i just felt like it was all happening fast but its still a good story and doing better than anything i could write

Im gonna give an honnest review/opinion i feel like to me the story is too rushed and that it should be slowed down cause i was getting lost sometimes but other than that love the story and keep improving and making good stories.👍🙂

I also alhavent read it yet but hey im second reveiw so its fine gonna tead it soon