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Bierbart4hコメントCh 17 RYAN AND LILY- Bierbart5hに返信 Kaizou_Koi
meh honestly that makes every story bad... those storys are kinda for people with a netroase fetish tbh... bit well not gonna judge *shrug*
As we approach the Tourney at Harrenhal (281) and the Rebellion (282 -283) things will change. I have thought of how to anger Robert and had writer's block. I was actually very close to going on Hiatus. Ironically, I found the solution and understood that I was actually looking too far. - Bierbart2dコメント
wimp... thats the good stuff
"No Blood Magic!" - Bierbart2dコメント
bit on the weak side for a system... especially in a magical world... with giants and the others... limited to normal human power as a base thats a bit of a joke honestly
Of course, the EXP is not my overall power. It is a boost or a buff that can disappear the less EXP I have. I can still get stronger the old way, and the EXP will add more to it. I am still training in the old way while gathering EXP to become more powerful. I need all the help I can get to survive in this cursed world. - Bierbart2dコメント
no Loot from it?:o
Took care of those goons, though. Then, under the cover of night, I sneaked over to the shop. Chugged a potion of invisibility and lobbed a splash potion of poison through his window. Watched him squirm for a couple of minutes before the poison did its job. Grim, I know, but hey, he had it coming. - Bierbart2dに返信 H3LI0S
probably when he finally ends himself with his grieve and angst over it... hopefully soon
They were his friends and he was lying about who he was. - Bierbart2dコメント
ibwondered why i didnt read further... but i guess the drama screwed the story for me up... and all the angst...makes one wish fir a redo with the person who gets to take over ashes body
But he was lying about who he was and they deserved better than that. - Bierbart2dコメント
did they purge it with fire?
' What is that like a Pokémon version of France ? ' - Bierbart2dコメント
honestly dornish is a bad choice... cersei isnt cured of her flaws and its doubtful she wiill so a bad choice too kinda .. honestly lyanna is currently the best choice ... if he gets her before the whole rhaegar thing after it would be juat drama and angsthandling which would screw it up annoyingly. an oc from essos or a character could work well honestly... esoecially for relations.. and his parents should sail there canonically... well die on the way home but well he could change that and if he goes there we have a plotpoint for it.. with the guilda its reasonable too for connections and trade. more potential than a match from westeros honestly
"Cersei is a child still. She might be more mature than others but she is still a child. There is no way, I would bed a child. True, I could wait but why would I if Elia is a good match? Tywin won't accept any offers for his daughter anyway. He has this idea of marrying his daughter to Rhaegar or Viserys and he will not bend. I haven't decided yet, mind you. I am simply evaluating my options and will decide when I go down to Dorne in the next few moons.", I tell Stannis my plans. - Bierbart3dコメントCh 1 I'm Naruto Uzumaki?
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football fan... should be thankful to not land in some ntr or yaoi world honestly... would be a fitting setting with that background
"Why don't you come out, I just want to thank you, face to face??" I ask mustering the best smile of my whole life. This bitch is telling me, it took me out from my 'not so perfect life' and throwed me in a fucking place where wars and shits go on. For fuck's sake I didn't even watch anymore than fifteen episode !! - Bierbart3dに返信 Kakarot1809
its already beta mc and it will get worse... also an added bond between the girls so yes yuri... and harry seems rather redundant in the whole romance stuff at that point... also lots and lots more of drama and angst because the love potion and assault backstory... honestly a badshitfest i dropped as soon as possible after that since it was just annoying to read
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Meh what to say? first of... the story is akready way more up on ff.net for free on another authors name... secondly too much drama and angst... esoecially in later parts too.. so do yourself a favor and save your time... only goos thing is the writing quality... from the original author... on ff.net....
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meh considering he jist agreed to be a servant in a way... and acrewed his own options for the future... cant even try to change some things since failure is death... and its not narutospecific...
Death - Bierbart3dコメント
already co sider removing it from the library kinda... useless to call it a transmigration or reincarnation then in a way.. especially if he forgets the plot too kinda...
You have experienced selective amnesia. All memories of friends and family have been removed. Memories of life altered, necessary memories kept back. - Bierbart3dコメントCh 14 Chapter 14: Kamar-Taj (Part 2)