Prolific writer, aspiring author, bibliophile, and a wrestling fanatic. Love anything and everything to do with fantasy and storytelling.
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An update will be coming in within the next week. I am planning to upload chapters in batches to ease the process.
Will take note... Appreciate the feedback.
I agree with the tiger thing. But, I haven't yet decided upon the spirit beast aspect. The story is growing on its own as time progresses and hence I am keeping my options open at this point...
Ha ha ha... I had the same thought flash by as I wrote drinking scenes. I thought it was only my mind that thought like that. Maybe, I will try to diversify a bit. Thanks for the input.
Thanks. I hope the following chapters give you the same enjoyment
Nah, not happening... I can give an author's guarantee on that...
Ah, there is a twist in it. Wasnt initially planned, but for convenience sale, I switched most names to Chinese for better flow. As for Duncan's name, a surprise is present in story, but it is a long wait...
Thanks, I also like reading and writing about these enlightenment moments... However they are a chore to depict properly. Thoughts don't actually follow a set pattern. They jump from one thread to another. Especially when your mind is whirling fast. Trying to make them coherent was a little hardThanks for your appreciation
Ah, that was a decision that took me a long time to come to... At this stage, mc still has some misgivings from his mortal life. He hasn't completely shed his morality yet. He also hasn't completely embraced being a cultivator. As the story progresses, MC's character will change slowly and he will become more ruthless.
I felt that the bloodline has been used too frequently... Moreover these are fights within his capacity. In my mind, the MC must be forced to dig deep for him to activate his bloodline. At this stage, he still hasn't gotten full control over his bloodline and is only exploring the basics. But don't worry, the bloodline will be a major part as story progresses