Nevarus
I love reading various LNs and I've gotten into some of my favorite series fanfics lately. Other things I love doing are playing games and playing the Piano.
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while faculty could be technically correct if looked at in a certain way, you should use a different one as it's an awkward use of the word.
is Dumbledore a woman in this fic? is that the key but of info that I missed?
head girl again.....
failed to catch potter ignorant is correct technically, but the following "he could punish him" makes the sentence mean the following. if Harry answers correctly then he gets punished. failed to catch him ignorant means that you catch them competent. if you take out the failure or change ignorant to competent, then it would make sense and be correct all around.
ignorance? alright author please for the love of God, use the right words.
is this Google translated? first head girl when talking about Percy and now headmistress when referring to Dumbledore.
head girl?
does the author hate all the Wesley's?
what is wrong with leaving his name as Harry? it doesn't need to be short for something.
tomboy? when referring to a boy?
it should be more as a base.... assassinations are much higher than that
not just paranoia....
I'm confused..... are you being sarcastic? because atm they are being incredibly racist (talking about batman and the others).
I will be
Snape wouldn't function as a spy if that's the case.... unless he was never a spy for Dumbledore, never took vows, etc.
hormones, really?
11 not 12
that's 10.96 years of straight meditation.
and bins. doesnt he drone on and on about the goblin rebellions?