James_McDonald

I honestly like the current status quo, there is drama, and it is very realistic. Looking forward to what happens next.

It depends on the seige weapon, in late midevil era to early modern(1200~1700) wall were increasingly an outer brik layer, with earth works on the inside, followd by an other brik layer. this was done as the earth works were better at absrbo g force of impact, which became more importand as cannons became better, and more common.

How long has it been, as far as i can tell its been at most a month since she found out.

But no cactus juice!

Skull joke

Awful way to hold a knife, only allows downward trust(think psyco stab). Proper way to hold a knife is to have the blade pointed in the same way as thumb when hand is open. ( hold a knife same as a sword)

While the premise of the story is good, the exucution is poor, i have a hard time reading it due to the monotone nature it goes in. i Do hope you improve, as i will keep this in my library to try it again. Also the titals seem to be in Portuguese.

Korin.

She/Her is a female pronoun. He/Him is a male pronoun . The fact that you use them all interchangeable makes it bery hard to figure out who does what action.