AsianLadyBoy

Mc after the feast

Okay, so far the story is just Okay. It has way too much unnecessary information. So expect a lot of chapters for no real reason. Because the stuff in those chapters could have been summarised into 1 chapter and it would have felt the same. Now, it's a bit weird that the MC is always in the chapters but he feels like he doesn't exist. Or should I say, it feels like he doesn't exist for anyone but Tony and Pepper. Becuase he as a character is relatively ignored by everyone else. He makes Baymax and everyone just acts like it's normal. There is no overall shock by the people around him. It's almost like "Oh, cool! A futuristic robot that can heal you! And it was made by a 14 year old kid! Anyways, so what are you doing Tony?". Even what I just said feels like more of a reaction then the people gave in the story. Because of that it just feels like the MC is a background character while Tony is the main character. The Author seems to be wanting to push the MCU story forward but by doing so the MC's story in this fanfic is suffering. Now, I am only 44 ish chapters in, and I will continue to read it. But so far it is a 3.5-star story. Nothing more, and nothing less. I would only recommend it if you have no other stories to read.

Well, if the world has escaped into the virtual world. Then it makes sense that the government would have regulated virtual gaming. Especially since I'm sure there are jobs in the virtual world. So the government would have to step in to make sure people don't get taken advantage of. But if it's China they will say it's for that reason, but in reality, they're doing it to take advantage of people.

Dude,no one cares if he has an AI that makes him OP. No one here reading this is trying to get a story that's perfectly balanced. It's a Justin Bieber fanfic for his Goodness sake. Just make it fun to read. If an AI helps the MC take over the entertainment world then that would only enhance the enjoyment of the story. Making the MC struggle all the time does not, at least not in these types of stories. The only way it would hurt is if the ai is overly involved in the story.

I don't have issues with this but some religious people really get in their feelings about stuff like this.