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This is one of the few novels on this app that had actually good translation quality. The plot id also decent, though a bit slow for some. I would definitely recommend it to anyone who wants to read something that has a good translation for once.
The writing quality has notably dropped from the beginning. The author either needs to stop rushing thr story and proofread his chapters before publishing. Comparing the last 20 chapters to the beginning, they seem like completely different stories.
This actually, genuinely good fiction that, for oncr, does not contain completely braindead two-dimensional young masters left and right. Characters are 3-dimensional and act according to their history. Translation can be meh at times but is mostly good enough. I definitely recommend this.
The novel itself is great! The pacing and writing are both more than adequate, and the system does not feel too overpowered so far. The only thing that drags what could be a great novel down is the atrocious translation quality. It is clear that the translator either doesn't care or doesn't know how to properly translate many terms and form them into a cohesive whole. I would desperately recommend a proofreader for this novel, as it would undoubtedly improve the overall quality immensely.